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Another Crappy Song by Mad Man
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lol
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DON'T FREEPOST IN MY SONG THREAD!!!
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is that a joke?
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that was somthing else.
dont wanna be negative so keep at it. you will get there. good luck |
At least it's not false advertising.
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At least I'm not 1-2....WHAT BITCH?
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your 18-4 in what ?....text right.....
this is bad..i cant lie...its real bad...and makes me laugh... rap isnt for you man...no offense..its not for all... keep at the writing though 1 |
huh..i didnt like this at all..yea stick to writeing...and a record dont mean shit...gohead say something like im 0-1 ohh..
i got a loss fucking around in a text battle,so what,i aint ashamed,,now whean you do a song and put your time into it and it sucks,thats whean you should be ashamed..peace |
............................. stop rapping in a quater note rhythm...
your rhythm is like.. 1 ... 2 ... 3 ... 4 ... and so on... boring.. learn something about rhythm |
THANK YOU, constructive criticism is what I'd like, and in musical terms which I understand. If you don't have anything nice to say, at least let it help me become better.
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