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AngelicSheShe 10-15-03 11:32 PM

work with me ... something different ..
 
Quick with an attitude to crave for anew
But only a few can even attempt to do what I do
Never the less I'm the innocent
Blessed when your lost and deficient
A robot couldn't be blessed with these eletrons
Like diced port chops mixed with your protons
your thoughts turn into mixed vegstables... pees and carrots "foo"
Thought you'd be smart and dropped outa school
I got degrees to match your sci fi kits
mixed with eternal engines to fire up your shit

~switch it ~

Religious praises got suddenly old
I'm looking for treasure but found penny's in stead of gold
trashed with emotions working ever so hard
and all you can afford goes on your credit card
dreams of saving of going to the top
but your hit rock bottom and still find a way to drop
needless to say I'm just babbling on
so if you even read this thanks ... poof I'm gone.....



yup...... you can hate now... cause I dont care.... I know my real potential... lol.... OoNnEe

AngelicSheShe 10-16-03 04:43 PM

I'm only upping this once..... OoNnEe

DiverseSyndicate 10-16-03 05:55 PM

tight piece ma, nice vocab, nice imagery, well laid out, it had a good rhyme scheme, all in all this piece was nice, keep droppin tha hotness ma.~1~

AngelicSheShe 10-16-03 10:57 PM

thanks for the reply....


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