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P.styles V Daark
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you spit 1st I 2nd no crew vote/dick ridin /beef/hate good luck |
Nigga consider this a precusor ta death / quick ta "snatch" ur lungz out ya chest so U can run outta breath / nigga I came ta disturb tha peace remember / like when ya bitch saw me...she started singin' tha wyclef jean hook "gone till november" / sadistic thinkin......like dissin' ain't an issue / nig' if I sneezed on yo "brain" tissue....at will....ur lame shytz still would'nt be "Ill" / liable ta leave ya frail body "broken" up like da fugees wit' ma gurl lauryn hill....bout' ta close ya "grille" permantely like "silent hill" / bitch I got a 21st century "ruger" equipped wit' Titanium clipz n' boltz / no joke / run up...get dun' up / venomous wordz done spoke /
p.s. I had ta go sumthin' sorry fa tha wait |
ha ha ha , what's this faggot takin about...........what have the fugees got to do with me?????????????????????????????????
Irrelevent faggot, they have nothin to do with me so don't chat shit in ya verse name droppin wyclef and shit............... About to merk this herb, Bahamian bastard................Check this shit out trick............................................. ............................... Why did this newby answer my bitchslapped…this bitch about to get merked About to get his fake Bahamian ass capped…Spinal cord spazzin, this bitch is hurt “Aspiring Lyricist” you say in ya profile…afraid to reveal your occupation???? This guy’s delirious, definitely in denial…this rent boy takes anal penetration Cos now you Gigolo job and secrets in the open…Lets get this shit official and real I think this newbies been merked, left in the open… can’t cope with big dog’s for real So fuck Daark, turn the light on and make this faggot light…erasin him like abrasion Kill him kwik, I’m lyrically tight…even if he sucked helium, never know of elavation To get some of the punchelines, open this guys profile and read it, it's hilarious......................................... ................................. DAARK R.I.P (ROT IN PIECES) ha ha ha ha ha ha |
stop bein an ass.....ya ass.......I killed U wit' strictly punchlines..imagine if I had gone all out on ya "government cheese" eatin' ass.....relax ya'self homeboi......ur done bitch
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shut the fuck up and stop freepostin to sway votes you herb..............wait sorry, I kno why he's sayin this.......is occupation is actually as a "rent booy", and he kno's I've found him out.......
NOW STOP FUCKIN FREEPOSTIN YOU FUCKIN HERB.............. PS>Daark's from Stoke on Trent in England and is really a white boy called Jeffrey Baker III...........................................ha ha ha |
maybe jeffrey is U lol......you 'lipton' green tea swillin' english homo LMAO!!!.....NAH shut ya grille sissy....and let tha ppl decide...FUCK!!
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this was kinda close, Daark had better vocabulary and some good but played punches, P had some original punches and ok vocabulary and a better flow, Daark ur verse was pretty good, but ur structure is what fucked u up in this battle (paragraph form) it made ur punches seem weaker, anyway here is a breakdown for u two....
Multis - P Metas - Daark Wordplay - P Punches - Tie Personals - P Flow - P RhymeScheme - P Creativity - Tie Complexity - Tie it was close to an extent, but Daark would've had a better chance with this battle if he didn't have paragraph form, therefore i have to go with P on this one |
no for real, you need to check his profile to truely understand my personals......................................... .........................
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this was a lop-sided battle kna mean... i read both verses and it seemed like daark doesn't know how to battle not hatin or nothin he seemed to me that he doesn't know how to throw punches.
wordplay:p structure:p worth readings verse:p waste of time reading verse:daark overall my vote goes to p both emcees keep doing ya thang kna mean ! |
ITE p got dis beta punches structure n flow.not a bad battle. plz plz plz hit dis up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85548 thx............................................... .................................................. ..................pz
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better break down needed from noww on................................................ ......................
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aye aguhny!!!..FUCK YOU nigga.....go post in tha battle I made up for us from yesterday..but ya punk ass probably got a bit frightned lol.....it's like wha'eva' wit' dis battle.....I made dat shyt in less than 3 minutes...while that ass P.Stylez probably had notes and jus' modified it ta fit me...MUHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA
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I keystyled it while I was waitin for you fuckin herb.............................................. .......................................
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i agree with this imbicile except for tha paragraph form shit wat the fuck are you talking about??? ure an idiot yo it dont matter how someone types it up a punch is a punch period! proficient had better non played punches nice flow and good enough wordplay peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5245#post845245 |
aight p.styles got this for obvious reasons.........only coz there was nothin personal bout daarks verse.....it was aigth tho but he jus lacked personal,relevant,punches.......
vote=p stylez nxt time dont say shit about his verse b4 ya battle him coz its classed as a type of feedin |
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