my first song
 

my first song I recorded... I just turned 12, and was doin
some Christian rap music... it was me and another boy... I done
forgot his name though... check it

aiyo,
we covered the back, and we done rolled it back,
comin around as we threw it back, you dont want that,
this is Christian, and we wont stop until you listen,
Now you wishin, choices pendin, stop pretendin you cant vision,
our decision is you next
we keep flowin and twistin necks,
Show respect for JESUS, even if you dont please us,
cuz, we TEACHA'S, preachin the word and all until we die,
When I say drop, pray to the man up high....

aiyo watch this bomb drop, Im in need of a cough drop,
you poppin cops in Kaufman Texas, pushin a benz and a lexus,
dividends for a neckless, we bout Jesus and livin reckless,
wont stop till we perfect this, we-cant-let-this,
ruin our weapons against satan, why you hatin,
you couldnt relate,
if you were contemplate with a 12 gauge and a hot plate,
Stop an wait and let dis marinate in yo minds,
so when I say Drop, pray to the man up high...


lol, that was my first recorded verses... I dont remember the
other kids... but it was prolly no better than mine... just postin
this shit so yall could see me elevate... lol
gimme some feed

this was alot better then my first mine consisted of new jack cities plot and me as nino prepairing to kill g money.......
it is amazing you would of had your first song i throw mine out after wa while..............
your alot better now thabk god or this site would of saerved you so quick.....
im up for collab when you want.

well for a 12 year old thats crazyness, i was barly even listenin to the radio when i was twelve, let alone tryin to rhyme, thats pretty nice right there... hope to read some more of your shit, so i can catch ur improvement


payce

Pretty good for a twelve year old :)

still uppin... thankz for da feed yall
~Ashy~