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*MoF* vs Tha Vision
5-10 bars (10-20 lines)
No crew, d/r votes... No feeding...U kno tha rest... Check in and than we drop, shouldnt matter who goes first cuz there's no feeding... |
aight dawg.....checkin in...
i gues i will spit tomorrow due the day! if thats okay for u....? peace out! |
aight dawg....here is my shit....
tha vision is ur name but its the wrong place at the wrong time cuz i am on a mission// wrong decision to battle me cuz i make faggots ridiculous but i aint expect a recision// with the provision that ure as wack as u seem i make u look like the pope in television// man u spit such a crap that rap will stay nothin else for u than a fuckin vision// u get a lyricall injection of my verses and ima make them turn in the direction of curses// after that u will need a lot of nurses but i have to rap gently or u have to get used to hearses// u think im a fiction..u would feel better..that u loose was a prediction..ya ass gets in a shredder// dont let u feel better, i hunt u everyday im like god, u also got fear of pray, i dont let u walk head-up// u try ure very best but ur verses aint heat, ure not strong enough and get locked down i a six feet deep// ur last battles were all won by feed ...like: "u love boys dawg?-vote for me and we gonna meet"// it was a failure to battle the MoF production......cuz i everytime aim a total destruction// ima burst ur construction...ure out of function....dont battle me again shoulda be ure deduction// are dead before u can start to swing.....ima let u leave this battle shocked like the dudes in "the ring"// im workin on a lyricall sling, that sling makes u choking and ur ship is sinking cuz ya rhyms aint linking// okay thats the end of my spit...i dont want no hate with u tha vision....cuz that would be shit// ima leave u hit....perhaps u could have pretend this shame for u just with 2 words: "I quit!"// |
ohh what the fuck......
that looks shitty....i should have changed the size..... and in line 13 is an "u" as the first word or letter missing... peace! |
Shit, i forgot about this, imma write now............................................... ................................................
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With shots on tha mark when I spark hitting tha left part of ya heart//
Fuck ya "bite" up when it "hits ya jaw" so "death starts when I bark"// * What u think u hard cuz of that gun in ya avatar?// "U can't see me", "Tha Vision leave u blind" and "mad at dark"// Don't start, this fake bitch tryna act big cuz he uses "tenacious" words// ** "Making words," hoping people think they mistakened slurs// *** MOF swear he creating verbs, now his words getting thinner// And I'm still tryna figure out when glasses gave people splinters// **** Since when did battles win cuz of "inners," u cant even "define ya rhymes"// *** and ***** U worked "full time" on ya verse and u still gonna leave with a "9 to 5"// ****** Explanations cuz there's a lot of personals in this shit and a few complex punches.... *I'm fucking his jaw up so he can't bite lines so now his rap career is over... ** He uses a lot of big words in his battles.... *** Quote:
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***** He uses a lot of multies and rhyme schemes in his battles but his flow is off a lot and he has no real nice punches.... ******His record at tha moment is 9-4 and Imma make it 9-5 and working a 9 to 5 job is full time.... |
uuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn nnn............................................... .
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This went to Vision hands down... til he stupidly started breakin erry line down an explainin the shit! Man wtf r u doin?! U went an ruined a perfectly gd verse that woulda won it for u but then u start explainin an swayin sayin the other cats always doin shit... really... WTF R U DOIN?! Now ima vote for the other cat coz wot u did was wrong in my eyes... real disappointin kid... u got madd skills an props for that... ur dope... but jus be u an fuk the ignorant fools on this site... if they cant vote dont let em... but dont start explainin!
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yo tha vision......
what the fuck are u talkin about man? u make urself ridiculous with ur shit! now im battlin u and not crazy patient......?? i cant follow u.... are u so afraid of losin this battle?? cant u win with the punches in ur verse.....?? man thats really stupid and embarrassing! haha |
its explain tha personals u dumb fuck.....go on any other rap board and u will see tha same shit....u wacker than me so keep ya mouth shut....
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nobody can be wacker than u........
but okay....believe what u wanna and get happy with that..... but u gonna lose! |
uhh aight---mof ya had an ok flow, sum multi's, but real soft disses/punches---the vision ya had an aight flow, aight structure, couple ok punches---but the breakdown is not needed--still ya verse was harder then his and i can't see mof havin 9 wins but that's wut it says---vote=the vision
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aight whatever.........
.................................please keep on votin................................ peace! |
this was a pretty nice battle
punches=tha vision personals=tha vision creativity=tha vision structure=mof flow=tie my vote=tha vision hit this wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85999 |
^ur battle is already finished so i cant vote......uuuuppppppppiiiiinnnnn.................. ........................................
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