TELL ME WAT YALL THINK? drop links too
 

this is from my most recent battle going on right now in front lines any feedback? watever yall say will be appreciated and shit peace!!!!!!!





they call u "Pac-Man" cuz u eat a lot of balls//
A reminicent of "Niagra" cuz a this herb always "Falls"//
battle call? this "new kid" walkin round rb's *halls*//
im a bully plus unruly flushin ya head in *stalls*//
you're dead from da neck up...you cannot <thank>// (think)
ure punches are more harmless than usin gunz wit blanks//
ure rhymes are more played than high school football stars//
my bars are apt wit ill & mad skillz deadlier than S.A.R.S//
u scarred, body charred, lookin normal...but only from a far//
cuz my personals are dark & stick to ya like tar//
its my untangible lyrics handle and strangle ya//
hurt ya & search ya stippin u of all ure gay paraphernalia//
breaking down my lyrics will leave u in a penigration//
a sticky situation like mulitiple ejaculations//
my fillers you would use as closing down "punch" killers//
i got u in my cross hair about to pull da trigger//
a K.O. no doubt this cant be considered a bout//
shit...im abusive wit my spits they take different routes//
u pout while i shout, left ya memphis and senseless// (bleek)
like AIDS u were defenseless in these lyrical trenches//


oh yeah drop links for me to peep and/or vote

here is the battle thread:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85734

holla

they call u "Pac-Man" cuz u eat a lot of balls//
A reminicent of "Niagra" cuz a this herb always "Falls"//

lmao.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,

good flow in places and some good punches...
keep spittin............................peace!!!!!!

thanks dog haha anyway anymore feedback???
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