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Sherly Critical 10-16-03 07:55 PM

ViciousThoughts Vs SherlyCritical
 
Okay...
As I said.. 10-25 lines...
And no crying.

And make sure to check in, ViciousThoughts

ViciousThoughts 10-16-03 07:58 PM

Check check...
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Sherly Critical 10-16-03 08:06 PM

Okay.. As you already agreed to spit first, I'll just say, good luck, and have a bit of fun with it, but don't get too wack. People just look annoying when they do that. But what should I be telling you? You're not a newbie, Heh.

ViciousThoughts 10-16-03 08:24 PM

My Rhyme's Goin Through Your Mind, Leave Your Thought's Wit Heat Strokes
Fuckin Albino Wit A Sun Burn, Tryin To Diss While This Bitch Read's Kid Jokes
This Cat Tryin To Spit But Only Thing That Comein Out's Hairballs
Like A Herbivore High On Weed, Critical Condition and She'll Sherly Fall
Your Rap's Like Dat Show 7th Heaven,
Long And Boring With More Problem's Then R Kelly Wit Little Girls Age Eleven
Bitch You Could Murder All Your Reletives And Still Not Get A Rec Or Rep Like ViciousThought's
Nothin Critical About You, You Robbed From The Fucken Gene Pool And Got Caught
Infecting You With H.I.V Skill Merkin A Femcee Breakin Her Own Rules By Cryin Cause She Not ILL
Couldn't Right Hot If Her Paper Was On Fire, Fuck It Bitch I'll Give you This Mic Just To Recite Your Will

10 Lines... Sorry it took long

EXPLANATIONS: Herbivores Eat Plants, Weed Is A Plant Therefor She Would Get High Quicker.

deser_eagle 10-16-03 08:27 PM

nice verse dog. waitin for that bitch to spit. she should be pretty wack.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

ViciousThoughts 10-16-03 08:54 PM

YAWN... UPPIN
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Sherly Critical 10-16-03 09:01 PM

Back. I'll just get to spittin. And no. I do not answer to a name of a female dog. Thank you. Have a good day. If I donnot spit as of yet. I'm probably gone, for the night, and will be back on tomorrow. I got this page saved, so yeah. But anyways back to spittin. (I was caught up in drawing.)

Sherly Critical 10-16-03 10:02 PM

~§Hey hunny. Here's the deal, Here's what I'll say, and I'll tell you for real-§~
~§ A nun compared to you, has some better skills. With what you'd make with your rec, couldn't pay your 'spandex' bills.§~
~§You're living off of high thoughts, thinking you and the Diddy, can tie knots.§~
While you still live in your momma's trailer, eating your frozen lil tator tots.§~
~§Your lame excuse of calling a white girl black, shows ALL of your class, only in Ape's school would you even pass.§~
~§Don't get me wrong but this chump's name's sounds like something I've cuddled: An albino toy poodle...!§~
~§You can whimperand sniffle, crawl back to your kennel. You've already been slapped back in a ten fold. §~
~§You're going back to the poor house, hunny. Giving your dad some, so you can at least have your lunch money. §~
~§Oh ye of little faith, at least you have not disgraced your clan of STD's. You should be proud, that you're even considered as good as a H.I.V. Paz. (Peace)§~

(I don't hate as that much, but I didn't have much time to say anything, being as I have to go somewhere....)

ViciousThoughts 10-16-03 10:16 PM

uppin for votes
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Sherly Critical 10-17-03 01:41 PM

Just uppin this. I'm at school, so yeah, not alot of time on my hands.... And by the way. I'll be back in in a couple of hours, if I'm not in trouble... Heh.

ViciousThoughts 10-17-03 06:32 PM

uppin
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Sherly Critical 10-17-03 07:40 PM

Uppin for votes, as pathetic as it sounds. Heh. Anyways, it is my turn to up this,.... so yeah... Paz. (Peace) I'll just browze around this place. Maybe learn some stuff. I'm out.

DeadlySpitta 10-17-03 09:16 PM

k here's tha breakdown.... Y'all both has sum decent lines.... But VT, ur structure is fucked up man... way fucked up... Urs too Sherly... I aint gonna front or nothin. Y'all both dis well on this shit. U can also elevate as well. But Ima hafta vote for.... Sherly got this. I understood hers more. It was hard keepin up wit VT's lines. No hatin. Just bein honest. Hit up my battle against m.B.P. Lataz.

Sherly Critical 10-18-03 10:17 AM

Just uppin this thing. How convenient that no one has voted yet. =P So anyways, Just please make your choice, and get this over with. I've seen elections go faster than this. >_O;;

ViciousThoughts 10-19-03 07:23 AM

Uppin
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