Fall From Grace
 

FALL TO THE CONVENENT

RAPPERS:ANTICHRIST,MICHEAL,DAVID.

ANITCHIRST:The OMEN has come to be-the fulfillment of the prophecy-
Man has willed to kill man and become his own atrocity.
As predicted since BABEL- to the eternal infernal flames
Of napalm prepping the temp of hell-that rise as heaven falls sleign.
The tru master will rain- planting my seed in fertile plains-
raise my fallowers from grain-infested with self inflicted blood stains.
tried to help man understand-subtract 2 ice caps and –
7 continents become a pendigram.

DAVID:But for a moment of hesitation-arnt you’re the lord of temptation?
The master of deaths imhabitation-the procreation- a manifestation-
Of devestation?

ANTICHRIST:No man altered my ego- to the alter of evil-
overzelous angels outcasted me for they were jealous.
Read your bible I was closest to he-
but the object of perfection couldn’t conceive-
to perceive….
he wasn’t without flaw as he saw his reflection in me.

MICHEALLbut waite)This cant be! You’re the epitamy-of all which is opposite-
To our fathers’ genetic composite-this is trick stop it!!!!!
It ws your desire and envy…I got your number 666
All those are marked in the heart you think this is this a joke.

ANTICHRIST:Nope but that theory is mearly a hoax-
GOD ROSE on the 7th day without any strength that is why it ends the week-
Man was bleek-to the unigue-ways we make them seam obsolete.
So was lazarous and nazreth-the brains a laberynth-The coarse disaterous-
7 is my number…. for spun around facing down it faces (L)eft-
right the root word of righteousness so I embody what’s the opposite-.
Mans gift was life, mine was death-the innoscence decompressed in you last breath.
whats so great aboute heaven?Yeah I sin against him but you wern’t involved
What comes up goes down gravity is pulling you down so problem resolved.

DAVID:But how can you just hate your creator?
MICHEAL:He gives you love now you gave him lust as a traitor
DAVID:He will always be greater>

ANTICHRIST:Maybe once before but now with war times have forward to later.
From the incabator your born into sin-so your lkife is mine from the moment it begins-
I just choose to collect when it ends.

MICHEAL AND DAVID SWITCHING:IT aint ever done-Wars are never won-
We’ve defeated your seven sons-When will you see the light?

ANTICHRIST:I do with the rising of the sun and day begun-He is greedy leaving behind none-
Says the night is mine but with everyone-
At their rest …if he is the light and I the night then doiminion.. I don’t have one.
Im the one you should show sympathy for not the other son.
When he died people cried-but when my heaven was denied you rejoiced-
I had no voice just a sentence I served with no choice.

MICHEAL:You want remoarse-for transferring the planet mother earth to a coarpse.
You expect the bleeding heart of Christ to paint your life?
You chose tryfe and strife he was sacrificed to make the balance saffice.

ANTCHRIST:But if god has total control-why did man pay the toll?
Why did the globe fold-the rain start and NOAHS’ ARK?
I dwell in hell with JEZEBELL- I learned of his gifts as I got older-
The first woman ADAM denied before that EVE bitch came and defied.
GOD GAVE ME A BRIDE FROM MANS LEFT OVERS.

DAVID:The truth is this the life you choose-paradice never left you-
instead it embraced you but not the path you used.
I was once confused-but now I see whats true-
you war in a battle you loose.
Praying to be killed so you don’t care if the balance tilts.
for the monestary of hate you built-was of your own remoarse and guilt.
You deserve hell-and you know it
You’re the god of lies but sadly cant lie enough to convince yourself.
Make since now don’t it?

ANTICHIST:
WONT IT?

uppin

Yo, man...

This was some pretty intense stuff.

Very good concept, man.

Looks like ya put it together in a hurry, though...
(just spelling and structure need work)

Aside from that, this is a helluva topic to take on and you did it real well.

Scary, apocalyptic shit is cool to me.

So is biblical study when the bullshit's left out.

This was bad-ass, my friend.

Real nice and complex work.

Way ta study up and learn what our fate might be.

Peace

yeah this was a nice piece and a very good topic. i was feelin the vocab and the wordplay. this was a good ass piece.

my favorite line

DAVID:But for a moment of hesitation-arnt you’re the lord of temptation?
The master of deaths imhabitation-the procreation- a manifestation-
Of devestation?

^^^that was hard

but there were many other hard lines as well that is just my favorite one

good drop

holla

thnk you this will be slept on but im glad some of you read and took time to grasp the concept

all i really need to say is DAMN!!!!!THAT WAS SOME SHIT- KEEP COMIN WIT IT

that was profound...like whoa! That's classic open mic right there, there's nothing I would suggest you change cause it's a real work of art.

you never cease to amaze me WP :)

DAMN!!! This was a tiight ass topic son 4real. I liked how you had the whole religious convo between david and the Antichrist that shit was def hot. You had some nice vocab, word play was tiight, just an all around hot drop.

Yo I seen in you location shit under yah name that you Italian and from Italy too. That shit is hot my Fam is from NAPLES Italy and we moved to Brooklyn too.....that shit is hot, its good to see other Italians hold'n it down on RB 4real. Be easy son, 1

sorr pop im not italian im stationed here till feb i been here many times and i love this places culture but im latino never the less thank you for reading this and everyone else i wondered how you might react to this and im glad the outcome was positive

UPPIN

omg this shit was so real... i mean not that the bible is really real.. but i mean.. yea.. ive read up on it and when i read this i was like damn!!!!!!!!!! the metas were so so, the vocab was pretty good... but it lacked in some areas. i like the whole conversation the way u put it together was clever, this is definitely the best read of the day.. always conjuring somthing huh? much propz and keep droppn, one.

thnks pop but please what lacked and what metas im curious

thye topic u picked i cud neva du its waz all tho there were a lil things wit structure but good piece

keep it cumin

Yeah.. Good Read :)

You came with a tight original topic with some good topic & your original flow.. I was feeling that.. Especially when you spat as ANTCHRIST.. That was perfect..

Yeah overall.. Dope stuff

I'm impressed.
Lacked some word technique, but still very solid.
How long did this take you?