A Day In The Life
 

ok this is a workin progress. Original beat by 21stavenueproductions.
feedback good or bad even improvments apreciated.

thanx

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/dphylo1.htm

dope drop phylo, phates beats are ALWAYS dope, nice flow, lyrics are ill........u down for a collab?

You know I can appreciate some shit like this. I like real shit, sounds good, I'm not really feelin the beat though, (I think it's the wrong snare or something) and I think you can put more flavor and make us really feel this real shit. Sometimes it's just a matter of beat breaks, or draggin out a word, really makes a difference.

Good drop man!!

don't like the beat huh...well i'll be schoolin u on beats soon enough Mr. Legend.


lol, seriously though, thanks for the feed. i'm going to be mastering D-Phylo's lyrics on the weekend and customize the beat a bit to match his drop. i'll swap in sum otha snares n see if i can impruve on the original.

pz

^lol awe you know it's all wood, I wanna hear it again when you finish though. Stay up

Aight don't take this shit the wrong way...just my opinions...

The beat was tight.
The sound quality was grrrrreeat...god shit on that.
I just wasn't feelin yer delivery but that's just a taste thing, i'm meaning the way that you flowed...voice is good and clear, to someone else this could be the tightest shit, just a different style than i like (a little too fast with the tounge rollin spits)...Lyrics however were tight, you weren't just talkn about some bullshit you had shit ta say...overall definately a good audio drop, nice drop kid, i'll catch up!!

Production is good, beat is aight

lyrics is aight, flow is good, delivery is aight

5/10
average

keep it up

thanx youll for the feed back its much apreciated