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Arrested Development got me getting Bigger than a Elephant
Rougher than SandPaper, ManRaper LandScaper
Hustle Hard in the Yard for Paper
Writing Letters Praying 2 Heaven. Got my Head in the Game been Writing -n- Spitting
Fighting in the Kitchen getting Prison Extended,
So I Inhale Death an Eat-It-Up Missing Getting Weeded Up,
I Cheated Enough it got me Sleeping in Bunks
I Keep on Beating them Punks I'm Never Reading them Books
Without a Glance or a Look I See Through Commercial Crooks
Commercial Thugs, Stuck here Im Infatuated with Drugs
My Piss was Dirty, aint 7 thirty just Harder than Most,
Thirsty for Blood and Hungry for Toast, So dont Stand Close
Known to snap like an Addict in Search of a Fix This Earth is a Bitch
just Dooable, not close to Beutifull yet I keep on Living
This is My Fault My Wisdom My Choice My Decisions

you got some nice lyracs. sounds like it would flow nice to.

"WITHOUT A GLANCE OR A LOOK I SEE THROUGH COMMERCIAL CROOKS"

THAT WAS A ILL LINE!

good look on the feedback.. glad you enjoyed it.. 1

though this started off weak, but as i read on it improved a bit, i didn't like the use of words, it seemed a bit basic, but the flow was ok.....overall it was an average drop.....peace

can you hit this little sumthin up.........

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=86339