[-=PorD TrohS=-]
 

He birthed the world, with the dream of something great
He was lonely up by himself, needed someone who could relate
So he made Adam, but he became lonely, so he proceeded to make Eve
Then they got together, and with eachother they conceived
Thats how we started out, and some still call me crazy
But there will always be non-believers, that much don't amaze me
They don't phase me, cause everyone has their own beliefs
But if die and and go to heaven, then I'll be relieved

nice piece, short and sweet. The flow is nice and the topic is original. You don't need any tips from me lol but I liked it. Keep dropping...

Hit up Asylum Gates/Dear Omens if you don't mind...

yeah 'Ill' this was a good to the point drop, nice flow and content
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.............keep droppin the right stuff.......

^^^thx... anyone else?

yeah so...Cody is a hoe.


i like how you write about whatever the fuck is on your mind at that current time. How you apply your situations in life to your writing is wonderful. this was more of the usual from you brethren, keep it up.

^^^I love you dez

one piece per day

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