where da peace
 

lil bit of a key style song, off da top o ma head,

yo this world has tha economy, tha philosophy, but where da peace//
we bust niggaz, and bar em up in a penitentary, dwellin in tha dark lonesome and lots of greef//
people b like its a free world, they actions make my stomach furl// fuck dis, it aint no free world, i get confused, wit all these wanna b'z//
u think u can do wut u want, man this freedom of speech and actions, always gettin miused//
emceez fuck around, and u get abused, dont meen ta intrude, but u need a clue on wut ta do//
niggaz always bustin they fuse, where da peace, i dont care where u located//
keep da peace, get motivated, all these gang thugs, they think they big, they over rated//
they act iz now out dated, rap has been miss played in tha past decade//
all these rappers think they gangsta cuz they on a murder ramoage//
fuck niggaz, cant u c its da rage, frum da past, past down frum there parents//
u can change ur appearance, get up and leave town, but every one knows bout ur disapearance//
u will neva make tha clean clearance ta ur getaway, u live bein in a seceret, but ur still a fake-ta-day//
all i ask is where da peace, cuz dis world b fallin a part piece by peice//
its on our shoulders ta make tha world a better place ta live, in tha present and tha future//
fuck these men when they hearts get colder, we gettin older but wut bout our wisdom//
where our freedom, WHERE DA PEACE.

feedback plz peeps, appreciated if i get props...

yo this was a hot flow nigga. i liked yo topic, we really do need some peace in this world today. now on to yo flow, it was tight you had nice vocab structure and some good flow. this was a real nice piece. keep droppin my nigga.

yeah i thought thiis was a decent read it had good flow, especially as it went on, liked the subject, and ya rhymin was good.......................keep workin.......Peace!

thanx yoz, apprieciated. peace.