"southern boy"
 

aw! naw, it's Jim-Dog, country boy raw, big 30lbs. balls
remix to this mutherfucker with a dirrty south style
you rang! hell yeah girl, you damn skippy i called
you bang! harder then some of these pussy's who act hard
you know me, don't be play'n like you don't
i'm JIMMY bitch! and i gotta a hand full of funk
gotta shit list too...........for a hand full of punks
call me rotten.........cause i gotta hand full of skunks
how could yall forget about 1 of the dirtest playa from the south
with a kotton mouth, and a middle finger linger'n
at any fagget that's crouched to his knees..........please
you gone need more then a sissy to get rid of me
i'm not sydistic, but i can show you how mystic
i can get with this sickness of viscious lyrics i'm spitt'n
pull out this mack 10 and start kill'n or get nasty with it
and pull out this shotgun which is for real men
you think JIMMY ain't gone blast
Nicca! give me a break, i'm with Luda shoot'n away
at any fagget that's fake
shotgun pump pumped up and gett'n ready to spray
and shoot it out with the cops till the end of my days
what! you thought this texas native wasn't gonna get a piece of this fun
and let them st.louis and alanta boys take the cake for some shit that we done
don't get me wrong now, shit! i got respect for them cats
but let me show you where this houston boy level of skills at
i gotta mixture of sick scriptures of slurs to react
back at these rap slacks who claim that their shit is in tact
man it's wack when these crack attics is think'n like
then start smack'n their fuck'n lips when they see me take control of the bat
what! you think'n this country boy won't start no crap
i whip it out for these bitches just to get their hormones rapped
and this time i'm come'n back with a new cat
i gotta new gak, to come and help me and fuck'n murder this track

thought this was ok, i wasn't really feelin the flow and the structure was poor, and ya rhyme scheme was basic, you should use better word play and multis to elevate..............peace

thanks for the feedback, anybody else, oh! can somebody tell me wat they mean by multis

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^^^LOL^^
But the end of that line diden't really rhyme too well.The begging was funny as hell.Your flow was on point,try some metties vocab and wordplay.Try and listen and i'll try my best to break down multis for you.

Multis r multiple rhymes within one of your bars.
Ghat-this-vet i read his verse and i start to wonder if this kid is quacking-yet
^^Ya know stuff like that
Overall rating:-6/10
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appreciate it dog!