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Talon 10-18-03 12:10 AM

Direkt-Threat VS Talon
 
RULES:
1.ILL SPIT FIRST
2.NO BITING
3.NO RECYCLING
4.NO D/R VOTES
5.NO HATE VOTES
6.NO CREW VOTES
7.10-30 LINES

Talon 10-18-03 12:21 AM

The Way This Vandalist-Prowls...Will I Win...Yes "Sir-Cuz (circus)" I'm Bout To Dismantle-This-"Clown"...I'm "Giving Direkt A Loss"...Might As Well 'Cut Off Your Fingers' Cuz You Can't "Hand-L"-This-Style...

'Smear My Genitial Sweat All Over Your Face'...Direkt Just Hates-My-'Makeup'...
"Killing This Prostitute"...You'll 'Pay For Your Actions' Cuz Talon "Beats-Whores-To-Death"...
Make This Fag "Explode From His Own Hands"...Didn't Think I Was Ill I'll Just Let You "C-4-Yourself"...
A 'Wordplay Wizard'...It's Like Everything I've Every Wrote-Was-'Sorcery'...
Talon Always Seems To "Drop Fire" In Threads...Direkt Can't "Hold-A-Torch"-To-Me...
This King Prevails-Text-Sports...With A KO Talon Occuring 'One-L-Set-Whore...
I Told This Fag I Was Ill...But He's "Ms.-ing The Point" Like "Female"-Es-"Score"-ts...

Talon's Text Is "Birthing Explosives"...In Other Words In This Thread I've "Spawned-A-Bomb"...I'm 'Doubling His Wits'...With Two "Idea Light Bulbs Over My Head" Talon Could Go "On"-And-"On"...

Direkt-Threat 10-18-03 01:13 AM

Whatever...Nice Qucik verse after like 5 minutes after my reply..but whatever...

Answered to the battle call 10 Minutes Ago, Let's Think-
Mabey this Cartoon Characters Verses Are a Little PreWrit-
With the Quotations in his Verse it's A No Brainer He Bites-
But he Sweats with Perspiration Like a Empty Container At Night-
Your Bars are Straight Rubbish, We can Infer the Writters Block-
Adding your Old verses in, When did you Decide to Stop?-
The Nonsense in Your Script, Where was the Information Found?-
Im the Surgeon, Your the Aprenthis, Im Literally cutting my Patience Now!-
1.Punches are Off. 2. Flow, Delivery, and Bar Structure lacked Stamina-
Don't usually Injur the Self-Illiterate and I Never Should Of Battled Ya-
Multiple Contusions Serve to Be right, And Im the Waitor At The Table-
Unsuitable for Humans And this Hater Is be Left Disabled-
The Slackness You Practice, Did You Think You Would of Prevailed-
Cracking this WackBitch on The Keyboard With A Prick of the Nail-
Hopefully the Message is sent, "Talons" Fuck-Up's Are Realized-
Opinions Don't Effect Me, I really Don't Care How You Feel Inside-
Talons Black and White Style is Old, It's Been Torn and Damented-
Crashed and Abandoned, Rhyming Prvilages Have Been Suspended!-

Direkt-Threat 10-18-03 01:10 PM

Damn dudes...Vote

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Dev 10-18-03 01:27 PM

this was a pretty 1 sided battle, but ill break it down anyways

vocab=direkt
flow=direkt
structure direkt
wordplay=direkt
personals=direkt
mutlis=direkt

the first thing i didn't like was the way talon, set it up and all the punctuation marks, it was pretty close in a couple of catagories like wordplay, but direkt just took them........if i could vote=direkt

could you hit this up.. plz....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86229

Mentally Kursed 10-18-03 01:30 PM

direct took it wit

punches
flow
metas
wordplay
and personals

both hit this please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85982

Direkt-Threat 10-18-03 06:18 PM

Uppin...
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-ElocuShun- 10-18-03 06:30 PM

liked direkt more...he had
betta personals
punches
flow
metas
wordplay
creativity
vote=direkt

make sure ya hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86214

Rob D 10-18-03 06:40 PM

direkt got this pretty easy,

flow-direct
vocab-direkt
structure direkt
wordplay-direkt
personals-direkt
multis-direkt


can yall hit these up wit honest votes, gettin mad slept on







http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86298

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85996

CrazyE 10-18-03 07:04 PM

Direct took dis one from all angles , I would have to honestly say .... He hit hard , had a good flow , and had some nice punches and rythming schemes.........

Talon , Didnt really feel ya dog , Yu edit that a little bit ,you got some tight shit , but the way it was written sounded kind of weak , hopefully you can spit it , better than you type it .


No beef , Peace , CrazyE
Peep ma Shit ................. Honest Votes only please .....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86214

Direkt-Threat 10-18-03 10:20 PM

Good battle...Peace Kid...

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Dope Wax 10-18-03 11:59 PM

V - Talon

Reason - Bigger sig

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