The Ladies.......
 

Don’t be shy, their aint no maybe be confident around the ladies
They aint gonna bite you, unless your lucky or give you a dose of rabies
just be confident around the ladies……yes be confident around the ladies

Nothing wrong with never being rich and not making a killin
As long as you get plenty of sex i.e. fucking easy weekend women
I don’t like those who fall under the label of unfaithful-promiscuous-livin
Unless of course it’s me who’s doing all the fulfillin-pleasureful-givin
In other words who’s doing the worthy deed of givin all the fillin
Cos I love women, hell I aint kiddin, need them like my balls to keep on thrillin……

just a quick sumthin for all the lady lovers.............lol

wow, its gonna take me all night to read through this feed..
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good piece, made me laugh, bit short tho,

good vocab, rhymescheme, and flow,

next time try and make it a bit longer but overall this was a good drop,

check out my Gladiator piece on the front page

peace

thnx for the feed, it was supposed to be short though, i do plenty of longer ones...it is just meant to be something to lighten the mood........lol.......see ya and thnx again

nice...sexy lol...now go treat yourself to one of my open mics...:)

and u say my flow sux...??


lol...

quit free postin in my thread,
if ya aint got nuthin to say, keep out...........
ya noob............
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what ya got to do to get some feed round here.. huh..........lol
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"I don’t like those who fall under the label of unfaithful-promiscuous-livin
Unless of course it’s me who’s doing all the fulfillin-pleasureful-givin"

i enjoyed those lines... i love them easy weekend women

thanx man, i know what you mean!.....lmao
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Yeah it was a lil short&it made me laugh.Your flow was on point stayed on topic,but what you need to work on is multis,metties,vocab&wordplay.
Hope that helps ya
*please reply to my "goodfight goodnight" piece*

yo started off weak, then just got better an better
nice short piece
made me laugh
i'll look out for some of your other shit

thanx for the feed, appreciated...........i'll be sure to check some of your shit..............see ya!