Plz feedback on new beat
 

hey yall.... im new to producing so give me some slack.. but i need some feedback.. tell me what i should add not add do or not do.... I NEED REAL CRITICISM TO ELEVATE... *Dont hesitate to show a lil love either

ok here is the FIRST BEAT I EVER MADE... like amonth ago... dont listen to long its trash... just want to give you an idea on where im comin from...

1 shot kill
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=524848&q=lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=524848&q=hi

now my new beat
elegant
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=633865&q=lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=633865&q=hi

this is a rough draft.. i left it open so i can take in suggestions and make changes.

i got some other ones... wat up.. am i elevate.. or what... do u see talent... ive been at it for about a month.

what suggestions you have??

uhh man you fuckin demented. you musta been smokin that sherm when you made 1 shot kill ahhahaha.

elegant the melody is cool but it needs to be looped better. just change a little bit of the end of the pattern and it will sound right.

payce

oh and i think instinct is your best beat so far. im a sucker for bangers.

i thought the melody was aight but maybe only use the high bell cymbals every 4 bar or sumthin. I wasn't as keen on the drums, maybe a deeper kick and sum constant, but really faint/soft shakers going in the background would help fill up the space a little.

keep at it.