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Fuck Tryna Fit In
Treated Unforgiven Praying 4 A Change
There's only so much I can take that much is plain Mininimizing the madness to maintain my sanity Searching for hidden blessings behind my calamityz Seeing nothing but hard times since I was juvenile When I was out of control living an addicts lifestyle Born into poverty and brought up a nobody native Give what I can to my caught up homies incarcerated Pondering at the void left after Mackavelli's departure RIP Big Pun Big L Biggie and JMJ no other cats is larger I love cats who do it for love man fuck getting ducatz No time to get my weight up I'm busy raising ruckus Keeping true means never losing my respect on the street Seeking love give me more than just a peck on the cheek Hot grrrl on the regular Phone sexy on the cellular Ever since I got good sex tattooed on the kitten Don't tell me where to get in I'm like fuck tryna fit in Wanna call me outcast I'll tell you what Does it look like I give a fuck? I've been thinking of adding to this and putting it on audio. The last 6 lines are irregular I'd probably make them the hook...Let me know what you think...what you liked...what you would change...etc |
i agree that the last lines would be good for the hook, i thought it had a decent theme and good rhyming structure, with nice vocab and feeling put into it......keep droppin it..........see ya!
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i wanna hear u audio so u should, it was a nice peice tho good vocab and flow, i also think last lines shouled be hook
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