..Quick Thoughts.. >>KeYsTyLe--
 

Keep the Henny Knocking you know your Cocked-When your operating the Cock-Pit
Looking out for Cops-Kid Swerving Speeding and Sleeping
will I Crash? am i Dreaming?
i can hear jesus Speaking access denied your a Demon
Sweating Bullets I'm still Here
all my Peeps in Hell Blaze a L Raise ya Beer, Swam in Holy Water found a Electric Chair an took a Seat
Fuck if the Flows Stretched its on Beat, Im that Grim Reaper in ya Sleep
that Dope Creature in ya Dream, the Coke Keeper ready ta Scheme
so much stress im ready to AHHHHHH!
Humbug Bah! The Holidays near I aint getting Shit
So I Do what I Do Best, Down a beer twist a spliff an wish for Death....

i didnt like this drop, no hate i jus didnt, no structure or rhymescheme, it dont make sense, but w/e, keep droppin and u will get better but u need to elivate,

return the favour and check out my Gladiator piece

we're all entitled to our own opinion

i think that you rhyme real well, but you gotta like keep the same amount of syllables n shit in ya lines, cause thats the only thing thats hard to follow like when you say sumthin that is like 3 words and then rhyme it wit like 9 words i gotta go back cause im like 'what?' but you rhyme good just focus good luck