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Rappad Vs Brotha Lynch
10-14 lines maz
i dont no u i just saw u in bs So u down blind spit 35 minutes from check in pc check in anstat the keying process |
yep....checkin in...verse will be posted withing 35 minutes...blah
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I left ya parts dangling from trees, head spinning and star-spangled
The only blows you sending unclog MC's pipes so I"ll call you drano I'll peel ya skin, your "weak with words" so I'll kill the syntax Ya skill is rif-raf, sear ya corpse while I spit flames so your soul will feel the impact Better stay anonymous, puncture holes in your esophagus Choke on your own spit to think you''ll win is preposterous Ya Flows ample, I'll leave ya words trampled I'm still wondering why ure in such a hurry to be man-handled It's like the W is in the stars the way both are always out of your reach You couldn't find "common sense" with a metal detector at a beach Wait a minute! I"ve just won, has anyone flinched? Someone call the cops, this Brotha's been Lynched! |
alright isnce the other fu hasnt posted yet ill hit this up if u guys hit mine up wit honest vtoes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86226 thanks peace |
Rappadly im savagely ripping this "Vet"s lyrikal vest apart//
This lessons marked for chaos, schoolin this kid before the test even starts// For this kid this battles gunna be hard,Cuz 4 votes its a must to ask// plus its fact,only way u gunna feel skill if u brush up fast// YA scripts are crap,Rappad u cudnt be money if u was the bank commsioner//(UNDER AvY) My Spits are drillin u in like i was the dental Practioner// Hopin i didnt show up u came weak,Thats why u thought to drop first// I smoke weed,an weak M c's, But im methodical i got more patience then doctors// This brothas lynched<naw thats just played how can u contest me wit heavenly rhymes// But u dont get it kid,still typin the same murder shit seventy times// THis battles finished,im quick to hit submit reply cuz im a menace// Ya raps been denied ,cuz im takin this win at the end of this sentence// |
punches.............rappad
flow...............both multies.................Lynche metaphors...........rappad personals...........rappad similes............rappad vocab............Lynche overall.............rappad Rappd Ive seen you come way better..........anyway please hit thsi up honestly bro, sorry i cant poll thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86410 |
^^Aite fool
wuteva man...i aint no newb if rappad wasnt 31-29 u wudnt voted for him nut wuteva it dont count. uppin for honest votes............................................. ... |
both evrses were average, i've seen RAppad come ALOT better....
Rappad's verse was lacking personals, and punches didn't realkly stand out and felt he could have come alot harder.... Punches = BL Word-Play = Even Flow = Rappad Originality = BL Personals = BL Multies = BL Vocab = Rappad Overall = BL Close battle but BL took it with better punches, both verses were average and could have been better...... My Vote = Brotha Lynch pCe |
ok brotha....that might be a dq....35 minutes from check in...you took 1 hour 9 minutes..............
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aight yo--rappad ya had a good flow, aight structure, couple aight punches i was feelin----broth aya had a ok flow, sum multis, not bad punches but not hard enuff---vote=rappad
return beeyatches---oneeeeee |
uppin..
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Rappad bra I gave u feedback on this shit the least u can do it Hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86410 |
uppin for votes...
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i give this shit to rappad....he out-edged you by a little bit....it was a nice flow for a noob though....rappad woulda and coulda merked you if he woulda take you serious, so be grateful for that....no hate tho, nice flows...
hit this shit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86435 |
its obvious u all vote for him cuz u need a battle to be voting on
LOL wow the only vet in here...that didnt have a link said Lynch..... this was a average battle ive seen rappad come stronger he came weak onthis ..didnt feel much lacked punhces I left ya parts dangling from trees, head spinning and star-spangled The only blows you sending unclog MC's pipes so I"ll call you drano First line was aa filler..but the meta4 paid it off i guess..weak. I'll peel ya skin, your "weak with words" so I'll kill the syntax Ya skill is rif-raf, sear ya corpse while I spit flames so your soul will feel the impact Coo shit....aite Better stay anonymous, puncture holes in your esophagus Choke on your own spit to think you''ll win is preposterous Big worsds cudnt make yp for this weak line u shud be spittin hotter fool..ive seen u wit siccer lines Ya Flows ample, I'll leave ya words trampled I'm still wondering why ure in such a hurry to be man-handled It's like the W is in the stars the way both are always out of your reach You couldn't find "common sense" with a metal detector at a beach Wait a minute! I"ve just won, has anyone flinched? Someone call the cops, this Brotha's been Lynched! Dat was aite......Last liine was a coo ender nuthin special. Rappadly im savagely ripping this "Vet"s lyrikal vest apart// This lessons marked for chaos, schoolin this kid before the test even starts// COo mutlies not bad pucnh..nuthin great.... For this kid this battles gunna be hard,Cuz 4 votes its a must to ask// plus its fact,only way u gunna feel skill if u brush up fast// Aite a bit choppy.... YA scripts are crap,Rappad u cudnt be money if u was the bank commsioner//(UNDER AvY) My Spits are drillin u in like i was the dental Practioner// HMMM...this was aite..wasnt feelin it tho Hopin i didnt show up u came weak,Thats why u thought to drop first// I smoke weed,an weak M c's, But im methodical i got more patience then doctors// Nice..SUM words were non needed This brothas lynched<naw thats just played how can u contest me wit heavenly rhymes// But u dont get it kid,still typin the same murder shit seventy times// That was tite..for a newb THis battles finished,im quick to hit submit reply cuz im a menace// Ya raps been denied ,cuz im takin this win at the end of this sentence// Aite finisher \BOth lacked personals mager..sum punches were thrown my vote goes to Bl For the simple fact he had better Mulites everything else was even Yo hit da link up |
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