ThaT's Gangsta.......
 

Im Back......... I Typed This Shit To Tha "That's Gangsta" Instrumental By Shyne........

Bitch...

I come~around~from~hell... but ain't SuRFaCeD YeT - pullin' earth
down to the underground~wit'~spells from DiSTurBiN' TeXTs... cause
the slumpin'~ground~u~dwell on is a CiRCuS NeT - only clowns seem
to make it, but when I BUST u get thrown down to tha pavement - with
the pound to ya face n' stash it in ur mouth on ya braces, I take account
n' yo bracelet, get drowned n' found with a facelift, motherfucka........

I spit a DoPe LoaD of one-liners that enter~ya~brain n' the
CoKe FLoW that I rhyme with remembers~to~change every time I switch
on memory~lanes.... Cause.... These BeeFS oF MiNe done got half a
my brains blown the FUCK out of my cranium, kept a - PieCe oF MiND -
when the other half STUCK out too but "stayed~in~form"... like a snitch
they say life's~a~bitch; u n' her must be siamese... I pipe~the~bitch
n' snipe~her~kids when I light~the~"piece" like Bright's~Disease....

think u NiCe, PRiCK? I can tell u was raised by~peasants... cause
herbs like u turn me PSyCHiC - but I dont see u in the future or
the right~present - I could smoke ur RHyMeS SCheMeS but I wouldn't
get high off ya lines~essence.... whether u MiGHT SPiT
with a mic or not, nobody would ever notice ur "Mic's precence".... n'
I feel~stirred when the haze clogs in my lungs, so fuck Speilberg
cause u can see the 'color purple' thru the SMOG OF MY BLUNT.......

I enjoyed the first one the Best... i thought they were really gonna pick up after that but they didnt...

the other 2 were aight... but the first one packed some heet

ignore this kid, the flow was constant all the way through, and they didn't get weaker as it went on, it didn't get better mind, about the same....good structure........i liked it....peace

Work on vocab and metties

^^^^^^ Im Not Gonna Misuse Words I Have Never Heard In My Life & Look Like An Ass........ & "metties"? What Ever The Fuck That Is....... If U Meant Meta's (Metaphors)........ They're There, Matter A Fact U Should Read It Again......

Uppin'