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Provocitive 10-19-03 07:59 AM

battle verse against lyrical distaster... give me some feedback
 
yo, this an easy win.. cause lyrically u ARE a disaster,
you could be the best rapper on earth u still wouldn't be the master,
that would mean i dont even exist, but i do and im decievin ya diss,
u cant go anywhere in battles.. thats why im leavin ya pissed,
you smell like it anyways might as well leave u like that,
this dykes-wacks, i could be knocked out cold and u still couldnt fight-back,
i think this guys gotta problem.. doesnt know shit-bout-rap,
u came into this battle shook up.. cause u got ripped-out-back

BLeeCH 10-19-03 09:43 AM

I thought your first 4 lines were ehhhh? nothing really special..

But the 2 after that were Hot and the last 2 were aight...

if your re-writing it... Id re-write the first 4...1

Maven 10-19-03 04:16 PM

one thread per day
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