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battle verse against lyrical distaster... give me some feedback
yo, this an easy win.. cause lyrically u ARE a disaster,
you could be the best rapper on earth u still wouldn't be the master, that would mean i dont even exist, but i do and im decievin ya diss, u cant go anywhere in battles.. thats why im leavin ya pissed, you smell like it anyways might as well leave u like that, this dykes-wacks, i could be knocked out cold and u still couldnt fight-back, i think this guys gotta problem.. doesnt know shit-bout-rap, u came into this battle shook up.. cause u got ripped-out-back |
I thought your first 4 lines were ehhhh? nothing really special..
But the 2 after that were Hot and the last 2 were aight... if your re-writing it... Id re-write the first 4...1 |
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