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Yo, I'm like a cannibal when I Devour you like animal-crackers, battlin mechanical-rappers like myself that go complex like a math question that manually-factors, after i leave a verse never hear someone say this sanctuary-sucks, so thank-u-very-much, ive seen wacker rappers then skanks-that-rarely-touch, finish u wit a scary-punch with various-words, if u see me laughin its at these hilarious-hurbs, they used to be the area's-nerds thats very-obsurd, aint bein sarcastic when i state ya shits far-drastic, u got bizarre-tactics and your face looks like a cats ass after my car-smashed-it, Im bringin drastic-hate, u think u comin hard but i smash u like a plastic-plate, you like rotten milk thats past-its-date, u claim u hadda dream who knew it was too masterbate atta faster-rate, u think i cant do shit lyrically just wait n see what my disasters-make, U spittin wack at me and the penatly's-death, you claim your spittin shit RIGHT when its sendin-me-left, u just a joke fagget cause in this battle im endin-refreshed,

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