...::Modern Britian::...
 

The english no longer have the power they did before
Used to control certainty by always invading the shores
Football used to be a boar..Not anymore with Beckham
He inspires global icons & now sports kid feel beckoned
To second him..English expectations are an exageration
Never reaching this destination & it leads to devastation
Just like a legacy of entrepreneurs there will will increase
We are never going to be like the french & will never seize
Have better peace..But the goverments are seen corrupt
People making these judgements wouldn't better conduct
But it does suck..Politicians are cons & won't ever deliver
We gotta gangsta Gordon Brown saying he will de liver..
Tony Blair..But there both a fony pair like Jordans boobs
According to you we all stick up pinkys while drinking tea
Saying thee, eating crumpets & that we don't act sexually
Look at me!!A common modern britian doing none of these
Only just started to get rock bands that makes ears bleed
Trying to grasp a lead..Who said britains were skinheads?
I'll grow hair down to my knees just to oppose whats said
But Hip Hop is dead..All the best artists are from America
We're meant to be an alliance but we try & challenge ya
First to stand on ya..Was Collumbus a traitor to Britain?
He founded the competitor & helped ground are winning
Also consisting of corrupt Kings that obstructed the whim
To weak to be king..All most of them did was have flings
Affecting how we're living now b'cos the marriages perished
Is it we've cars that theres no golden carriages cherrished
Is Britian Relished? How can we when we've bad weather
Or we can't better anyone & anyone can't stay together

sum dope shit man.....
cos i cum from england, i know wot dis is bout.......

your vocab and multis are dope.....
lyrics are gud, really feelin these few lines...

"According to you we all stick up pinkys while drinking tea
Saying thee, eating crumpets & that we don't act sexually
Look at me!!A common modern britian doing none of these
Only just started to get rock bands that makes ears bleed"

This is a tight peace
Dope Shit man....
a gud read

stay up

Peace Out............................................... ....................................Fiori

Nice shit...good message...I think would be better as an audio track...keep writing man...

I So Totally Love Your Flow Dude! LOL (jp not a dits)

but fo real it was good



RAD!

deepness^^She said it all

I liked this man...I have no idea what your are talking about.
ofcourse im not from Britain....but overall a good verse....
u did lose me on some parts though......Props

word.. Up

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This Is DuckStyle^

^Real nice dawg...u had deep meaninfull aspects, ..
a nice vocab ,...a hot flow, and olso some funny aspects

Trying to grasp a lead..Who said britains were skinheads?
I'll grow hair down to my knees just to oppose whats said
This made me laugh...

Overall a nice piece, ...well explained, topic, u stayed on topic, ...just nice...

Pz

Thankyou..

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This was a nice piece. You came out and said some things that threw me completely off, but in a good way. I just didnt see them coming up next, which is a good thing. It kept me at the edge of my chair.

Your flow is flawless, the content was nice eventhough I cannot relate to some of it because of where I live as do where you live.

Vocab was dope, you use some nice words and all. Can't say too much about that.

Multi's and rhyme scheme you need to up a tad bit, your multi's, I mean. Your rhyme scheme is solid, try to change it up every once in awhile though instead of doing it the same from start to finish. Throw a multi in here and there (you had a few, just saying a few more wouldnt hurt .. just dont force them)

And.. After that, the only thing I can say is get behind the mic!

pz..1
-salvation
hfe

Nice shit.... good vocab... good wordplay... I haven't seen to many people from the UK spit... nice to see... Oh, just a question... I heard Beckham was playing for China now... is that correct? Holla....

I love this peice. For all the Americans and stuff who read this- THIS IS WHAT BRITAIN IS LIKE. Everythin was great here. Well done

damn... I've never seen structure like that in my life... props.
your flow was good, but a bit choppy when you first came in,
but overall it was good. You had a good use of multies and shit,
props again... and an unusual topic... keep droppin thiss shit...
I cant say much against this...

Please take the time to check out Word Pefects and A.T.'s collab:
What if it was you!

heres the link dawgy:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86862

~Ashy~

good piece.......................................UK cats balzin too....good to see////////////////