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Face in my hands/ my heart on my sleeve/
the most important organ left open, so all can see that part of me bleed/
my face in my hands, i hide in my palms/
tears fall trapped, i wanna scream, but sink in the darkness that calms/
love is lost/ now the lonliness calls/ for me/
nightmares are my memories/ anything with you and me/
sweet dreams i do tend to see/ anything with you and me/
time moved us apart, ending/ anything with you and me/
you and me, You And Me, YOU AND ME- echoes get louder which is reversed/
repeatin all through my head, resounding makin it worse/
is it worth/ all this struggle and trouble/ you takin over my thoughts/
i don't know if im in love with you or not/
face in my hands, facin the facts/ exactly where i lose control at?/ tracin it back/ pacing my tracks/
you said "hello", I said "i do", my mind wandering, losing me, leading me, guiding me astray from my path/
away from my grasp/ the hold i had on all of my past/
on all reality/ falacy/ overtook in a flash/
face in my hands/ soul in an uproar/
chasin the man, while hes tearin my up more/
images i conjure/ urge me just to get up and leave/
but its not an option, you got my heart on a leash/
a part of my sees/ a girl thats naive/ livin in dreams/
but the other sees a hopeful that was duped and decieved/
victim of robbery/ burglary came by forced entry/ one injury/
i swore i wouldn't be the one, but in the end, of course its me/
call the police- i been had/ call the ambulance- i hurt so bad/
cupid missed me shootin, so I was stabbed/
damn. face in my hands, shakin my head/
could i have had a love? i don't know, its wasted instead/
layin in bed/ the times we shared replay in my head/
never ceasin/ just repeatin/ till the day that im dead/
i should be used to this/ this times not exclusive its/
like each time the smoothness hits/ tears me up in two, then splits/
sick of bein used and betrayed/ abused and afraid/
sweepin up my bits of attraction/ the reaction/ to hurt a man made/
a hand came/ and washed my worries away/
it brought to life, a love i wanted, that was burried away/
the same hand ripped out my heart, for that, im blamin this man/
for havin me dwellin in sorrow, with my face in my hands/

I want to work on the ending the most, so any suggestions? and overall opinions on what else i need to work on, good things, etc??? HOLLA