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Evolve 10-20-03 02:14 PM

13th Disciple VS Twizzle Sticks (Do Or Die Match)
 
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Twizzle Sticks.. Now Is The Time To Prove You Belong In The LLL

Voters are to vote on two issues:

1) Who won the battle
2) Should Twizzle Sticks Remain In The League


Check In Due: Wednesday 10-22-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-24-03

Good Luck & Dont Come Half Assed......

13th Disciple 10-20-03 02:36 PM

in

13th Disciple 10-20-03 06:32 PM

okay...quick key.....



T-Pound....Addlib....and Twizzle Sticks...aliases all one in the same
Beatings....a Joke....and a Fruit....yup...all representing your name
u lack game..u been clubbed...a joker...a queen...reshuffle ur deck
heard this was a walk in da park,i'm just following there footsteps
nevertheless, i scanned ur past battles,& talent i couldnt find it...
i mean hell...last week in LLL...u lost to someone Feebly Minded!..
damn it i'm Blinded!...the more i dug..the wackness was deeper..
i don't need wordplay in this battle..cuz u don't use them either!..
skillz neither...wanna remain in the league?,betta play them cards
but Sticks, u wouldn't even be here if ur genepool had lifeguards!
causin scars..Productions?..'what was once fallen, shall rise again'
how'd he be a member when he never fallen cuz he never began


blah....keyed..match or whateva...feed if u need.. :) ....hope u
stay in the league... *smooches*

LiB 10-21-03 07:12 AM

In.
yea i'll key sumin later,
and werd my verses so far have been poor.....soz
so i'll make it up...

LiB 10-21-03 04:58 PM

Okay i'ma free sumthin up now to prove my worthyness, hope yall see an improvement.

1.....2......Free....

Talk about "Elevation" but shit you need emotion,
I'm beatin you with-a-harder force than two faggots in motion,
me..i'm doin audio, you stickin to text and still gettin shook
Whatchu gonna do with your lyrics release a fucking book?
look..You gave no other option but to verbally boot ya,
Stick my dick in your college money just to fuck your future,
and Deep inside your heart you know you'll never see fame,
That's why you lookin for respect through a fuckin screen name,
shame...when you turn your mic on, you turnin the crowd off
What fuckin emcee's you eat that makes your shit come out this soft?
...Doesn't matter what alias, got no doubt I'm gonna win,
If victory was the bible, then disciple...you'd be lost in sin...

DaviD WoRdplay 10-21-03 07:12 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by 13th Disciple
T-Pound....Addlib....and Twizzle Sticks...aliases all one in the same
Beatings....a Joke....and a Fruit....yup...all representing your name
Weak Opener... not a good personal.. could've been flipped better
u lack game..u been clubbed...a joker...a queen...reshuffle ur deck
heard this was a walk in da park,i'm just following there footsteps
1st line- Filler.... 2nd line- decent punch
nevertheless, i scanned ur past battles,& talent i couldnt find it...
i mean hell...last week in LLL...u lost to someone Feebly Minded!..
Nice personal...
damn it i'm Blinded!...the more i dug..the wackness was deeper..
i don't need wordplay in this battle..cuz u don't use them either!..
1st line... wack didnt lead up to 2nd line well.... 2nd line, Nice punch... made me smile..
skillz neither...wanna remain in the league?,betta play them cards
but Sticks, u wouldn't even be here if ur genepool had lifeguards!
decent punch....
causin scars..Productions?..'what was once fallen, shall rise again'
how'd he be a member when he never fallen cuz he never began
Good personal...


[QUOTE]Originally posted by LiB
Talk about "Elevation" but shit you need emotion,
I'm beatin you with-a-harder force than two faggots in motion,
Damn... that was wack
me..i'm doin audio, you stickin to text and still gettin shook
Whatchu gonna do with your lyrics release a fucking book?
uhhhh nice try with the 2nd line.... ok punch, 1st line was decent
look..You gave no other option but to verbally boot ya,
Stick my dick in your college money just to fuck your future,
First line.. wack.... 2nd line... wack & played... very played
and Deep inside your heart you know you'll never see fame,
That's why you lookin for respect through a fuckin screen name,
Dcent...
shame...when you turn your mic on, you turnin the crowd off
What fuckin emcee's you eat that makes your shit come out this soft?
uhhhh the 2nd line was stupid...
...Doesn't matter what alias, got no doubt I'm gonna win,
If victory was the bible, then disciple...you'd be lost in sin...
Decent closer...
{/QUOTE}

Vote- Deciple... better punches...

Chrit 10-22-03 09:52 AM

13th took this with better punches...

Lib came kinda wack actually...
Except for his closer...

So Vote- 13th

Vote Lib- Out

youngblood 10-22-03 03:47 PM

13th got this one.....he stayed more consistent.......

throughout his verse.....his punches......

connected better....he lacked a lil on wordplay though.......

addlib....u came decent..i thought......

but ur puches just wasn't as effective as 13th's.......

and u didn't compare to his personals......

so my vote goes to 13th....for a better overall verse.......

and i say addlibb stays IN the league.....<----WeRd

yep...
pz....

AMEND 10-22-03 06:33 PM

Blah Shit, 13th Got This With Simply More. . .
LiB Aint Even Keep An Intrest, Shit Sounded To Audioish.
v- 13th
v- Lib out

Horud Skys 10-23-03 02:57 PM

Im feeling Nice


Vote 13

Vote Lib In

13th Disciple 10-23-03 02:59 PM

eh....looks like that quick key of mine won it....but regardless...
keep Twizzle Sticks in.....he got skillz

Evolve 10-24-03 08:19 AM

13th Wins
Twizz Loses But Remains In The League

Closed


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