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AMEND VS Island
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Check In Due: Wednesday 10-22-03 Verses Due: Friday 10-24-03 Good Luck & Dont Come Half Assed...... |
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Hello Amend... How are you...
I'm going to pummel you... and one Avalon punch... or a Merk Squad punch... or a Chynadoll/Kendra punch... or a British Knight punch... or even a dumb ass stupid alias punch... and I'm gonna destroy you... :-D Good luck buddy... |
Uppin Over The Closed Battles
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How Many Lines?
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Only 12
Things To Know Atone = an attempt to make amends Avalon is an island King Author was burried on Av also makes boring beats. ------------------- Proud Your Alone? - Island, & Wonder Why Hes Out On His Own? This Clown Is A Show - Checked In, & Already Vouchin' For Votes Your Attempt Of Outin' The Known - Left You Drowned In Atone Whether It Was Av Or Island. . .Both Were Surrounded By Flows Now Out Of The Boat, Its Sink Or Swim, & Since Ya Flow Is Solid It Wont Take You 20.000 League's To Reach The Ocean's Bottom Av, I Know Your Problem, Just Go To Sleep - And I'll Tell Ya Later It Shouldnt Be Hard - Since Ya Beats Are Only Played In Elevators Be Real With Fakers, So Dont Lie To Yaself - Or Even Play Pretend But It Wasnt Because Of Your Name Change I Wont See A Again |
this herb is past wack... I'll break my foot off in your ass crack,
now honestly, was that ya verse real..? or just something to laugh at..? . . . . . . . . . . I'm known to rip herbs and such... to shreds... and it hurts but, Amend'll live... shit I'll even hire him to explain MY verses..! so drop the pen, faggots prewrite but on the real I'm felt, no love & I bet ya parents are disappointed in you... cause you didn't kill yourself... sayin "fuck, I's nice..." next time better check twice, cuz my roots go back over 160 wins... his go back to head lice... come on Amend... you want none- neither pussy or me, cause the only thing phat or criminal about you... is locked in the cells of arteries... get cha backpack and stencils... note pad and ya pencils, cause with this line... ya record just matched the forum name in initials... Puberty is at a standstill, looks like your face is damn filled, with enough acne to give loney tunes a full lifetime supply of anvils bitch... Nobody'll believe that Amend bites, but listen to this, why WOULD I diss your verse..? I've always been a fan of Chrits bitch... I'll boost ya ego... if you're a god then I'ma pummel the best, and you are a net icon... that's why everyone say... fuck custom text bitch... mods must be smart on me... give a nicca two byes in a row, Island don't pull cards... I'll place ya face between my bicycle spokes... BITCH..! and I'm spent... |
Av took this one hands down....
Some killer punches in there... Creativity and nice flow killed amend.. Vote- Av |
I'm goin out of town tonight... so I may not be able to vote this week... if I can't... I'll double the votes for next week...
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Good Battle
Amend Now Out Of The Boat, Its Sink Or Swim, & Since Ya Flow Is Solid It Wont Take You 20.000 League's To Reach The Ocean's Bottom Av, I Know Your Problem, Just Go To Sleep - And I'll Tell Ya Later It Shouldnt Be Hard - Since Ya Beats Are Only Played In Elevators Nice Section Avalon come on Amend... you want none- neither pussy or me, cause the only thing phat or criminal about you... is locked in the cells of arteries... Nice Overall Amend was more consistent in my mind Vote Amend |
Av Merdered This..
Amend Came Decent But Didn't Match Up To Av's Punches Vote - Av |
Vote = Amend
His puns hit harder and in less lines...And he was more consistent. |
Av Took This... Punches Hit Harder Then Amend's, I Did Like The "Vouchin For Votes" From Amend Though... And Av Has To Drop The Whole "Bitch" Four Times... Weird Rhyme Scheme.
Vote = Av. |
Vote- Av
He Had A Better And More Enjoyable Verse.. If Amend Had Gone As Many Lines As Av It May Have Been Closer.. But Av Killed With The Wordplay, Punches, And Personals In My Mind.. Vote Av... |
I think Av obviously had the harder personals. Amend had a nice flow and crazy multis but Av was too strong.
vote - AV |
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