Alchemy [VS] WiL Getcha
 

IIght..

10 Lines
Due: 40 Mins
House Rules
Spit Weneva

Chekk
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Chekk, my rules said you spitten first man, you agreed, or do you wann blind spit this?.............................

Blind Spit..
40 Mins..

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the suspense Is killing me .................................................. .................................................. .......................

I amr eady dude, jsut drop yours and I will drop mine.
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Drop Now If Ur Ready..I'm Just About Done

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I Won't Peep Ya Verse
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I'm Sonning You To My Instrumental, Feel Me? Rock To Tha Beat
If Raps Your Gift, God Hustled U...Hope U Got Ur Receipt
Not Cut For DM, Shit Got U Heated, Now U Hot?
Tha Only Warfare This Kat Heard Of Wus On Tha X-Box *
His Skills? Wrecked Shit, Believe It...Ur Next Kid!!
Alc Got Game Like Tha Bengals...Cus A Loss Is Expected!
Step To Tha Throne? . . . Battle WiLL..Only In Effort To Get Known
HaHa..This "Dude" Couldn't Be Off Tha Hook As A Cordless Phone!
Open Call Out, You Say U Can't Beat Me Nd Stand Tall?
But U Juss Anotha MC...Anotha Brick In Tha Wall! **

* Warfare - XBox Game
** He Has Beef Wit Brix

Spit..!!

Spit Kid..!!

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Stop Stall'n..

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Broad and outdated, ya bend over backword, truly constipated/
This battle is anticipated, you ahve no clue the tensin ya created/
Death wil come, swift wings, Im controlin ya mind, an other things/
Choir boy claps after he got raped and sings, you know I'm King/
This is not all Alchemy teaches, raped again while I preaches/
Blank mind crazy and beseeches,"Can you smell the peaches?"/
Drained to achoma, speaking wit an impediment, like Oklahoma/
Senses so blurred he smells amonia, hope Im not alone-wit-ya/
This is my revolution, ya mind has collapes, ya formin a contusion/
Mind contorted wit confusion, you only wish this an optical illusion/

There, not better the the other one, but still alright, give me some comments on this new style, good, bad, what? I don't care if I lsoe, just comments.

I aint stalling Wil, I just type extremly slow, sorry for takeing so long, no beef, good luck man.......

wordplay.............will
punches.............will
flow...............both
style...............will
vocab..............both
metas............will
similes..............will
creativity...........will
funny.............will
structure............both

vote...............will

Sorry i cant vote but will took it with the phone line lolol, very original bro

anyway please hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86796

with an honest one

^^Noob vote and no other explanation thne that.
Wil will probably agree to, oh well there will be mroe.

[1] Uppin for some votes, good votes.

Lets get some mroe votes in here people, well lest get some votes period. Please tlel me if my style betta or not.

[2] Uppin...

Alright guys this is stupid. Drop your links and I will vote on them, easy enough.

[3] Uppin for some fuckin votes...

Wil took it due to punches. Alchemy was just rhyming didn't have punches. Wil had nice punches also. Wil took this and I gotta say not a good style if theres no punch. ex. (finisher)

This is my revolution, ya mind has collapes, ya formin a contusion/
Mind contorted wit confusion, you only wish this an optical illusion/

^ ^ nothing great about this except vocabulary.

Vote = wil