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Peril Eyez vs. me
10 lines max
no d/r hate crew bitin ext. u spit first ill set it up 15 min to spit after set up ( not check in ) |
r u goin to check in dude !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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man were the fuck r u , r u goin to fucking check in ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????/
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Movin up in da Rankings.....
Son, im Deadly On Melodies Everyready lik batteries, Im Fantasticly rappin da beat makein every rap a masterpieace But dats at da least, I stack sheets, of dis magic then i release Inhale you bitchass THrough My lungs That are black & deceased I heard word dat you wack in da streets so you jump on text to see wat you can mask into speech you try to get out, but im already in fast plus I drop weight lik slim fast stay in 305 and im "holdin it down" lik a bonner in gym class rap jus aint your thang, better off on da curb wit da heat watch how i burn on da streets ill rip our your heart and spit a verse to da beat then finish acapella as i spritualy do when i done, change your name to lyrical 2 Out Da Box |
you said no check in!!!!
15 min freestyle.... you up son............................................... ........................... |
yo first off the limit is 10 lines but it is all good i dont care
this is my first tex battle ever i am a audio battler and my mic is broke so i am goin to go with text for a while so here is a quick key-style ( freetyle ) U know I’m going to scare u for life and you cant go into leave public// 20 years from now you’ll look back on this day, and change the subject// And I’m going to love it, you clam u come harder// You say u the best at sex, now all u need is a partner// Yo I am merking you but that aint the only reason why your pissed// Hell I’d be mad to, if I couldn’t find my dick// I really hate to do this, but damn im having fun// looks to me like not only the good die young// (Finisher) cause damn, u want to know the difference between u and me// 2 things, raw verbal talent....& puberty// not bad for my first text ever u can tell i am audio ( lol ) |
best of luck man freal uppin~for votes (1) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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im audio too.... jus tryin to work on my lyrics
Uppin fo votes... Everybody's a snake, so i keep my grass cut so im can see em' comin an lite dat ass up-Jada |
i think Lyrically got this one.....
i just felt he stayed more consistent throughout.... his verse....and structered his shit better.... so my vote goes to The_1 with a overall better verse...... aight folk..good battle.....<----WeRd yep.. pz.... ->Je@!<- |
pretty even battle. better vocab/multis for peril....got some clever/funny punches in there too...but lyrically had harder punches and better flow/rhythm in his verse
my vote lyricaly ey yall pleaaaaaase hit these up with HONEST votes thank yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85646 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84560 |
youll got to be kiddin me he wrote his shit wit crayons....
better punches??? he dident have one metophore or punchline in there??? |
dawg i dont know i think it was a great battle liek i said that was strait hey- style and multis aint all u have to have to win a battle u did have bad structure but best of luck dude
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nah, homeboy said you came wit "harder punches"
im jus sayin you dident have any.... you do got good structure.. i can tell your audio but when in text i think it should be judge on lyyrics such as mets and puches |
yeah we me and u cant help how they think man but i do like how u flow and u gave me a better match up than strangla12000 he was fucking whack go check out his verse in mine and his battle in the front lines
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thought peril had a very weak verse, the flow was off, the structure was non too good, and the punches were just as poor, i didn't think lyrically, had great flow either, but he came harder with the punches, and it made me laugh more....so theres my vote=lyrically
ill poll soon once i get 100 posts.......could you hit this open mic http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=86549 |
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