Dominator |vs| ~D~Abyss~
 

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No hate votes
No friends voting... I dont care if they are "honest" or not
YOU spit first
If you want it, tell me in this thread, if I accept I will reply here and YOU can set it up.
Post midnight tonight.... and ill post by midnight tommorrow...

^heres da fools rules..

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Im checkin in... I wont take all that time in the rules.... that was just incase whoever spit decided to post at like 11:59 or whatever..... Im at college now and have a class in 30 min but when I get home at 6 EST, if you have spit then ill do mine the, aight man??? And good luck... Im lookin forward to a good battle...

Dis~fools~a~biter Domiated writer why his knuckles~dusted
I~twist~ya top despite ya stiff until ya buckle~n~cum~head~busted
Like~parkinsons or virus's i wreck ya A.I.M n peel~ya~skin
Im~straight~laughin~son how this pussies wet n no wins~cummin~in
I~slit~ya~throught till ya coughin blood its wat ya lips been~dreamin~of
My~spits~leave~ya~broke eatin mud ya buried kid im spittin~from~above
I~desect~ya~mind n enflame ya thoughts like deepthroatin~match's
Directing~ya~blind ya fulla shit cus ya provoking~backwards
I~Detach~ya~bones n crack em shoot at ya feet fo~break~dancin
Snappin~tones my feedback aint general its straight~advancing

The only way D-Abyss could eva spit something 'ill', is if he was puke'n up piss /
Dawg your a lil' bitch, so kiss this, even my sister could bust out a better diss //
You be sayin your from '1 Step Below', But boy your one step behind my kind /
Ya skills be far from refined, you be leav'n these cats wish'n they be deaf or blind/
After 1 Bar these cats will have e'nuff of your stuff ~ theyd rather see Fat Bastard in the buff /
With ya tough guy avvy all thinkin you be rough, shit man your nothin but a cream puff //
Im makin your first match your last, ending your career so fast, puttin ya in a full body cast/
My skills are unsuprassed cuz my lyrics kill herbs like you quicker than a nucleur blast //

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 100% Merk'n ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Uppin 4 votes so this dawg can be knocked the fuck out
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i think dominator took this ine he had harder hittin punches and better flow, the thing i would say as, stop making some words bold, it looks herbish, peace to both you dawgs!

vote=dom

1. ~D~Abyss~

"Like~parkinsons or virus's i wreck ya A.I.M n peel~ya~skin
Im~straight~laughin~son how this pussies wet n no wins~cummin~in"


^^^That right their wasnt bad. That was pretty much the only Punch that really stood out to me in your whole verse. You were consistent with your punchs but in my opinion they werent hard hitters nah mean???


2. Dominator

"After 1 Bar these cats will have e'nuff of your stuff ~ theyd rather see Fat Bastard in the buff /
With ya tough guy avvy all thinkin you be rough, shit man your nothin but a cream puff //"


^^^HAHA....that was kinda funny, them bars stood out to me. Your punchs were kinda soft to in some aspects. Tho you were alot more consistant with them and made them fit better then A-byss did. And like what o'boy above me said....when you type of your verse, please, please, PLEASE DONT MAKE YOUR WORDS BOLD.....shit looks corn ball and makes you look herbish nah mean???

All in all i think this was a pretty weak battle, but both of you are new to the site and still have alot of learnin to do so i aiighnt hate'n on either one of you. Just keep battle'n and uppin yallz skillz and elevate....

My Vote = Dom

Aiight Wateva

2-0 Dom...............................
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uppin

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uppin fo some damn votes...............................
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Alright thanks for the advice. I will stop bolding em, anyone else have anyone other points. And Y_Not can you please poll vote...

and uh...

UPPPINNNN FORRRR MOREEEE VOTESSSSSSSSSSSS

not bad battle both came aight but most shit wasn't connected........
p[unches=dom
laughter=dom
flow=abyss
metas=dom
structure=abyss
multis=none
creativity=dom
overall=dom
harder punches win battles unless flow and all else is ill.....dominator cut the bolds.......and abyss cut the ~....these jus look messy........but props to both

aiight thanks fo the vote etc

3-0 Dom

good battle i guees

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*pulls ~ out of keyboard*

D~Abyss.... its only 2-0... Y_Not didnt poll vote.... its first to 5 votes in the POLL..... so yah I need 3 more votes.....

UPPINNNNNN

UPPIN 4 VOTES

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