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Peep these mad, meaningful multi's, please...
Diseased trees droppin very sick leaves...
Like cheatin cards slippin outta sleeves. My mind's a forest from which I retrieve... Visions of memories that make me grieve. Can't forget the past, there's no reprieve... I wish I could percieve it was all make believe. Go back in time, never land the fatal cleave... Never feel the upheave but I'm not that naive... I couldn't run from this crime if I ran ta Tel Aviv. It's my own guilty conscience I'm tryin ta relieve... By spittin these words in this thread I weave. I'm just sittin here thinkin and tryin ta concieve... That evil and I were once thick as thieves. |
This was a real nice ...Piece of writin..
U used a real nice and high vocab, combined with a nice flow A good concept.. Nicely those multi's.. Goos job on that one.. Enjoyable piece,... Overall a good piece.. I could break down , ..on what u could do better, but its fine the way it is... Props.. |
tight in general i saw no flaw but im sure you figured as much
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good job sir, the flow was great!!!
multis were definetly mad and pleantiful topic was 2 clear for me though... if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87052 |
yo that was sick needs a bit of work but dam
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Thanks much for the feedback, peeps...
Especially the latina lady, gracing my thread with her first post... (If I wasn't married, I'd swear I was flirting like an herb!) Much appreciated, all... Keep em comin. Peace |
i was really feelin the spit....
my style comes hard with multies... therfore much respect, tite drop |
I love the peice......I like to use multies wherever I can so I was feelin this......good work B2K
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