Tökën Vs ~D~Abyss~ (with poll)
 

Rules:
No D/R Votes
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
You Spit First...
Deadline 7:00 Tonight Eastern Time
10 Lines Max

Good Luck...
You Called Me Out So Bring The Heat Homie

Like broken matresses im quick to spring pain to ya ass
Step up practice cus my speed laced joints passin ya fast
Newbie carpenter lost his saw..blind..can't navigate the boards
I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws
Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder
Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber
Im leavin ya blind like tha kids who messin with doggs shit
Ya body bits l b harder to find than sadamn in his bomb pits
Ya lines just straight horror When Newbies Bite Back left you chockin
I done expired this wack Token like his moms falopean tubes neva opened

blah..keystyle g/l

Good Drop Man I'll Spit As Soon As Possible... You Got Potential For A Newbie... Like Whoa................

Sayin My Style Looks Like Shit... Yet Look At The Sig That He Reps
Learn From Doctors For Animals And Still Couldnt Elevate To A Vet
You Must Be More Than One Step Beyond Us...To Spit That Kinda Shit (Profile "From")
Kinda Like A Dehydrated Camel The Way You Lack Flow When You Spit
Check His Posts Per Day... 37.85... Didn't Know That Was Possible
Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle
Optical Obstacles...Like A Rollerblading Ref I'll Keep You In-Line
You Couldnt Cum Back If You Literally Fucked RB.Com's Spine
I'm Going To Cause You A Wordwide Electrical Fusion Black-Out
(Under His Sig It Says Worldwide Fusion)
After This You Can Call Me Warren Sapp The Way You Got Sacked-Out

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*Rollerblading Inline Skating Refs*

And Let The Voting Begin...

Damned Writers Block

Oh Yeah...
Bionicle Was Brooklyn And He Had A Few Usernames Which He Would Vote For Himself With...

yo this was close....

token you got skillz, I know you can come better than that, I hate writers blcok too G I know how that shit happens....

yo d~abyss, you might be a new screen name but you definitely ain't no newbie, you got skills of a vet no doubt....


punches: d
^^"I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws
Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder
Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber"
OUCH
flow: token
^^"Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle
Optical Obstacles..." Good Sound to it
personals: tie
originality: tie (not really anything ground breaking)
enjoyability: d
overall: d

vote = d

but this was hella close

yall return tha favor and hit this up with an honest vote:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87114

peace

thanks homie

id vote if i had me 100 posts

1-0 D

hot verse Token
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Yeah Thanks.... Should've Came Harder Though...
I Still Think I Gotchu By A Hair But We'll See... :D

uppin1

2.Uppin

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ight this was a ratha good battle...both came bout equal in flow an ish

there are def some quotablez here....

token-Check His Posts Per Day... 37.85... Didn't Know That Was Possible
Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle

I'm Going To Cause You A Wordwide Electrical Fusion Black-Out
(Under His Sig It Says Worldwide Fusion)
After This You Can Call Me Warren Sapp The Way You Got Sacked-Out
^yay sapp is tha MAN

D- I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws
Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder
Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber


well neither got real personal....so neither was real creative in that aspect....flow on both was hot but i thiknk that token came with better punches

100 to vote

sorry homie

1-0 still


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um i have 100 and i did vote *shrugs*

i for got about that rule so i posted a few times....but itz a fair an official vote so


1-1

HAHA!... lol

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token got him with vocab ,punches but d got him with flow still token gets my vote now ur turn

Wow... Could You Make Your D/R Any More Obvious?
Vote Gone
-Axe

Damn...
Beat me to it Axe.
-Chrit

Good job mods..

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1-1 still my good friend :D