[Wk3] Mystery Murdera vs Edicius
 

'In Front Of You'

I say this one..like this...

Mystery?...what u think..

you can both do different topics lol


Oh..Ok..Lol^^

-in-

In front of you..

.:Its in front of you:.
The continously search of tryin to find answers,
makes me do things,normally never woulnd't do,
Equalisation of complex nightmares encountered,
but often the solution,funny as it is,is in front of u.

.:Why is it so hard:.
Its real tense and immensely rewarding, when u recieve,
what u, in your heart so.. pure & perfectly, had bein givin.
Or is their no more than,just impressive death animations,
stuck on my blurry daily visions of this so called livin'.

Maybe i shudnt try so hard givin up to expectations,
just look into my future, face forward stop lookin back!.
But still i remain with a feelin of slightly disappointments..
Waitin frustratingly,on that change,that one tru come-back..

The struggles i tryed to conquer remains oftenly un-rewarded,
and the damaged sources,to bad as it is arent vastly improving.
The rapidly disappearing, of exposing aspects of my expression,
only the final results suprisely just keep on coming disregarded.

.:But now..is it changing?:.
At first thought that it was unavoidably to replace,
the unchanging pain.. that was buildin up.. inside...
What would made me feel significantly better than i feld before?
So i tryed to look in front of me, instead of tryin to hide..

Goddamn it!

U Hate This Man, 1 More Wrong Word n U Sure U'll Fate This Man
Disgusting - U Can Just Picture Urself With His Face In Ur Hands
Yet He Stands, Proud, Akward, With A Small Smirk On His Face
Like All His Imperfections R Blessins n Just Work For his Taste
It Hurts, U Can't Shake'em, But Thing Is - He Is What U Made Him
See This Man U See Is U - No Matter how hard U try.. Cant Replace Him
Everyday U Face Him, n Everday He Points Out Ya Flaws
n Laughs But U Dont See It As Funny At All

But Today Is Different...

The Weight Is Shiftin, U Face The Mirror With A New Decision
Indifference - And Now U Winnin - U Lift It Into Position........
Quick Shit - Another Sin, Someone Missin, Mirror Splits.........
Into A Million Incisions

Ride 2 School
A Smile Wide That's Sure
In A Heated Situation, He Knew How To Decide Just What To Do
Swallow The Pride - How Many Could Look In The Mirror,
Smile Inside... n Then Kill The Man Right In Front Of U

uh huh.. chyea... look deepa

uppin this

my vote goes to MM

Edicius - you had good content but i was feelin the abstractness of your flow... at times it was hard to follow...

The struggles i tryed to conquer remains oftenly un-rewarded,
and the damaged sources,to bad as it is arent vastly improving.
The rapidly disappearing, of exposing aspects of my expression,
only the final results suprisely just keep on coming disregarded.
^^^my favorite part of your whole verse... i klike the meaning

MM - your verse was solid... it was an enjoyable read... i like your whole first verse... the imagry is dope, and i like how you twisted it... goood shit

^ word
Vote-MM
Edicius, sorry cat, but your verse was a good drop, but you kept losing yourself, and it was hard to get interested

MM, your verse was dope, you had some real good imagery, like how you switched it up, kept me intrigued

Decent by both of em'...but MM's was better throughout
MM had a better flow n story to it...it was fealt more...
with a simpler vocab n all...he was more to the point...

Edicuos...there isn't anythin wrong wit a different format to ya flow...
but this here i couldn't get a hold of...sometimes it wouldn't rhyme...
fo like a few lines...n it's lost already ya know?

vote=MM


CAN SOMEBODY PLEASE HIT UP MY BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mystery Murdera Got This One...
His Flow Was More Easier To Follow, But Both Had Great Vocab And Complex Wordplay...

Edicius...Your Flow Was Wierd, And Made Your Verse Sound Off...
Props To Both On Topical...

VOTE=MYSTERY MURDERA

4-0 up

Were did vocab, complex go mines was poetry flow, ..read it..?

one line
rhyme
third line
rhyme

Oh well..

Vote mm cuz i couldnt understand my verse..
Way to high vocab ,...and it looks struggled, ..when u use hard Words..than the flow went of, ..cuz its audio so the meaning dsnt mean ne thing rite =/..

5-0

Good writin it flowed good mm i heard it = ) Passion for my ears..

Pz

??? weird as that was ^^^ thanx man, up

If Its Not Over..
MM Took This

Edicus..
Not Bad Dukes, But I Couldn't Fall Into What
You Were Saying.. And It Took Me Awhile To Catch
The Rhyme Scheme.

MM
Definitly Elevated Man. The Story Was On Point
And The Flow Of It Went Nicely With Your Material.

Vote - Mystery Murdera

Thanx man, I'm still kinda new wit this open mic thing so I'm catchin on a little bit. Any words of advice is appreciated.