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Brixton vs Talon
10 linez max
no nuttin....crew etc 30 min spit limit afta chek in must chek in b4 at least 2 personals no freepostin in here eg bitchin bout votes dont come soft faggot pz............ now lets see him get merked |
MAN IGHT BUT I AINT PUTTIN AT LEAST TWO PERSONALS
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-Brixton- makes 'reservations' to death's inn...punches leave you with "bleeding gums" like names of "INDIAN CHIEFS"...
-Brixton- A BASTID...I'll conquer your rap style wit OBTRUSIVE TACTICS... From the "school" of hard knocks I'll throw punchlines so ill...you wonder how I PRODUCE THESE "CLASS-SICKS (classics)"... Ya RHYME IS CORKED...stashed away in a FINE RESORT eating you for lunch with a KNIFE AND FORK... TALON’S QUITE DISTORT...I'll LIGHT THE TORCH and bring "bra's" to ya "casket" n give ya "LIFE SUPPORT"... I'll SEVER THIS FAG...Ya 'text is trash'...might as well put ya LETTERS IN 'BAGS'... Like your "record" I'm "losing my patience" with battling you wack cats like low-profit "MEDICAL STAFFS"... I'm Treatin-Ya-Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, -Brixton- I'd Make U *Eat Ya Own Words* But It's Probaly Not Even-Ur-Verse!! (He's A Fuckin' Biter... Pathetic!) |
UPPIN FOR THIS CATS VERSE AND DONT BE TALKING BOUT HAMPSTERS ON WHEELS AND SHIT
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Shit jus saw this kwik freestyle.........shud be enuf to merk this cheeky loser.............
Hate These Sad Bitches That Flirt Glocks In The Avaters, This Herb Talon Dont Bring Heat,Jus Adds To His Haters. Already Hung This Chump To Dry On Tha Shelf,All By Myself, Not By Stealth,In Open View For All Peeps To See This Elf. Coz His Punches Lay Low,Its Like They Play Hide N Go Seek, You've Been Dissed All Ya Life,But Ya Couldn't Last A Week. I Hear The Lord Calling, Its Time To Merk N Send You Above, But I Bet Ya Kill Yaself, Like Kurt Cobain Did For Courtney Love. So Put Yaself Outta Misery, In Fact...Do It For The Rest Of Us, Or Jump In An Institution...So You Bounce Of Walls N Get Fuked. |
structure-brix
flow-brix punches-brix personals-brix brix killed it here, talon u need to sort out your structure, honest vote here plz,gettin mad slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85996 |
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hmmm...looks like a god damn d/r but w/e get yo cheat votes |
You've Been Dissed All Ya Life,But Ya Couldn't Last A Week.
^ OH NOO SHIT THATS TOO HARSH! -Brixton- Your Style Is Exactly Like Mine Fo Real! I Thought That Was Me Battelin For A Quick Second LOL But Nah U Came Hard! I Hear The Lord Calling, Its Time To Merk N Send You Above, But I Bet Ya Kill Yaself, Like Kurt Cobain Did For Courtney Love. ^ I Dont Like That Line Its Too Kind LoL So Put Yaself Outta Misery, In Fact...Do It For The Rest Of Us, Or Jump In An Institution...So You Bounce Of Walls N Get Fuked. ^ Sounds Like Somethin I Would Say To My Ex B.f .................................................. .................................................. ..... Talon You Had Good Multis Ya RHYME IS CORKED...stashed away in a FINE RESORT eating you for lunch with a KNIFE AND FORK... TALON’S QUITE DISTORT...I'll LIGHT THE TORCH and bring "bra's" to ya "casket" n give ya "LIFE SUPPORT"... ^ I Dont Like The Way You Add In Capitals And Put Dots........< And then use these "" Without That It Would Look So Much Better I'll SEVER THIS FAG...Ya 'text is trash'...might as well put ya LETTERS IN 'BAGS'... Like your "record" I'm "losing my patience" with battling you wack cats like low-profit "MEDICAL STAFFS"... ^ Its Kinda Played But Meh Its Aight I'm Treatin-Ya-Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, -Brixton- I'd Make U *Eat Ya Own Words* But It's Probaly Not Even-Ur-Verse!! (He's A Fuckin' Biter... Pathetic!) ^ I Like That!!!! Aight Well Lets C... Why Do I Feel So Nervous When Voting In This LOL? punches=Tied up multis=Talon Metaz=-Brixton- structure=Brixton- wordplay=Tie Seriously I Cant Stand A Verse With Bad Structure It Makes Me Not Wanna Read It.. But Keep Elevatin And Dont Vote Against Me Cuz Im Only Votin Fairly Vote=Brix |
i dunno, im still bewildered with RB's vets
when i read their verses, it doesnt seem vet material to me (no offense brix) but the disses just seem elementary but wuteva, mayb thats the style for RB, the love elementary stuff even sayin that, Brix got this tho the other guy, wasnt really feelin his disses, and seemed kinda forced and some were played structure = brix flow = brix punches = both wordplay = talon metas = brix vote = brix this battle was *blagh* hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324 |
origanally posted by Talon
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I can't vote, but I got a comment. I liked the battle, it was interesting. It is obvious Brixton is a little more advanced but Talon wasn't weak, he just needed a little harder edge to his rap.
All in all, good show gents! check out Aragorn in action@http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87431 |
flow..Brix
punches..Tie vocab..Brix originality...Brix personals...Brix overall...Brix Peep this and vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86845 |
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Flow - Brix
Personals - Both Punches - Brix Multis - Talon Meta4s - Both Originality - Both Structure - Brix Wordplay - Both Vote = Brix Gd battle... jus felt Brix's structure made for better punches an flow. |
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