Shady Vz Dominator
 

yo here the new thread

i'll blow you up leave you def as i ~blast thee~, "why i accepted?" dont even ~ask me~, free win for me cause i already ~passed 'Dominator'~ and trust me, this aint ~blasphemy~
how you claim to be a thug amazes me when your ~wearin pink~, fuckin fag, i couldve sworn i seen you in that band ~queer n'sync~
you ~won one~ battle and it was by ~luck~, so i dont see where you gettin this courage from, your ~done son~ plain old ~fucked~
while "delinquent" is ~played over~, im showin this herb that im the "mastermind" at runnin these ~spade rovers~
this ~playboy bunny~ tryin to ~step to me~ but im laughin too hard cause his ~gay joy's funny~ as if his ~rep is glee~
and i aint tryin to be ~racist~ but im puttin ya ~race~ to ~disgrace~ while still being ~gracious~
why you actin all tough when you really ~ridiculously meticulous~ its like you aint even tryin to hide it, ya pussy ways are ~conspicuous~
nah dawg hold off on the ~invitation~, i dont wanna be in your punk crew, you guys get no ~appreciation~
im ~blazin shells~ while ~raised in hell~ sayin ya shits original yet all you did was ~rephrase my spell~ stinkin so much you left a ~dazed smell~
i'll ~graze ya shell~ leave you in a ~phase of hell~, just admit your 'ways', its ~pays ta tell~ and to this ~gay farewell~

Who knew, another poser namin himself shady, thinkin HES the real one too, well fuck you, your a disgrace to the game and your merkin is long overdue, ill be leavin ya black and blue //
When I cock I don't disarm, im the kinda playa that be inflictin serious bodily harm, cuz boy quit talkin like your got game when your rhymes are more outplayed than Pedros arm //
Your not from an untouchable place, dawg your nothin but a damn disgrace, makin the name shady look wack, ima murda you without a trace, cuz I got more on ya then a child custody case //
The closest youll ever get to the big time is cleanin the shitters backstage, no afterpartys for you cuz your fuckin underage, dawg your fuckin 20 years old and your still makin mininum wage //
Cuz you'll nevah step in my palace, where the mic is my throne, your just a pathetic unknown, gettin murdered at the mic like a cyclone, and fadin away quicker than Culkin did after Home Alone//

DAMNNNNNNNNN THAT WAS SOME MERKINNN HAHAH VOTE PLZ

uppin for the the KO lol errrrrrrrrr i mean votes

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Uppin X 2

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This was close. Both came strong with punches. I thought the lines were a bit long on Shady's verse but I aint gonna judge the battle on that. I'm goin on creativity and personals. I think both were pretty much even on creativity....to close to call but I think dom just edged it on personals. So my vote goes to Dominator. I cant poll so get a mod to add this vote

im'a break this one down
opener:tie
closer:tie
structure:none (both had stretched out lines)
wordplay:shady
punches:dominator
overall:dominator


best lines
Shady:none, hardly any of your lines actually made sense
nah dawg hold off on the ~invitation~, i dont wanna be in your punk crew, you guys get no ~appreciation~
^^^^what punk crew^^^^


Dominator:
DAMNNNNNNNNN THAT WAS SOME MERKINNN HAHAH VOTE PLZ
^^^the most true line in the battle^^^^


both y'all need to work on those long, lines, easily more than one battle could of been made out of these.

shady, most of your shit was complicated, it look like you just got two random words, that ryhme, an stuck them into the easiest sentence you could think. (jus keep elevatin)

dominator, pretty much the same really, apart from the tow words, in a line thig, (jus keep elevatin as well)

thanks dogg.... uppin 4 more votes

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dunno what ya'll readin i clearly ripped this nigga
but whateva these probably ya boys votin for ya ass

All your punches are overplayed.... you rap about gays and nsync.... that is OLDDD

how you claim to be a thug amazes me when your ~wearin pink~, fuckin fag, i couldve sworn i seen you in that band ~queer n'sync~


haha.... uppin for votes

hmmmmmmmm need 3 more votes

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opener:tie
closer:tie
structure:dominator
wordplay:tie
punches:dominator
overall:dominator


return tha fav

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87763

hmm still need 3 votes

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Dominator took this with better punches...

That's the only story here.

Both ya'll's format sucks rocks, though.

Real stretched lines don't make flow...
And it only makes you look herbish to make em that long and ta add all the ", //, ~, all that...

Claimin Shady, well ya soiling the name...
The fact ya spit dirt, slims ya chances at fame.

See, I hit hard, used nice wordplay with personals, and kept the bar nice and short, easy and quick ta read.

Dominating what? It sure ain't the verse I give...
Change ya name, tell the truth and go by Submissive.

Again, used tight personals, wordplay, and hit pretty good without writing a paragraph.

Flow, wordplay, metas, personals...were all fairly even.

Punches took this, they were harder by Dominator...

Peace

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