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Dimez 10-23-03 09:53 PM

~LaDy DiViNiTy~ ..vs.. kool-killa
 
5 Barz
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Feeding
No Riding

Regular Battle Procedures Apply

Blind Spit!


Good Luck Son!

Aight Lets Go....:p

kool-killa 10-23-03 10:27 PM

aigh ya good luck to ya too aight... ;)


i'll spit 2mmorows ...when iam online....

iam doing some shit 2nite....aight

peace-this is my cheq inz

Dimez 10-24-03 02:42 PM


Wannabe Killa
Quality Over Quantity You Aint Got No Game ,Feel Tha Pain Of Mah Verse When I Spit At Ya Dame
Feel Eruption From Tha Lyrical Scriptures In Mah Brain Cuz It’s More Then Kool Killa Can Maintain
Kids Thinks He’ll Beat Me Yeah Right!(..NEVER..)
The Day This Kid Will Beat Me Is When Black Panthers & The KKK Unite
Theres No Hope Of U Winnin Not Today,Not Tommorow, Nor Tonight
Leavin You Blank To Match The Description In Your Profile
This Joke Of A Faggot Should Be Eternal Patched To Nicorette, Fallin To His Death
Each Verse You Pathetically Display Like Wack Audio Is A Waste Of Breath
I Could Spare This Line And Still Paralyze Like I Terrorize And Sterolyze
I Could Be Wearin Lies And Could Still Honestly Tear Eacha His Rhymes
Finishin You Off Like A Piesa Cake
Torn Up Inside With No Pride The Only Thing Left 4U To Do Is To Hide
I Spit So Divine Follwed By A Pair Of Nines ..Looks Like This Wanna Be Killa Died


(as soon as u open this spit aight, one remember the deali)

spitit 10-24-03 03:15 PM

Lady

Visit Bitch Slapped

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kool-killa 10-24-03 04:22 PM

i aint got time for ROOKIE SPITS cuz i drop flows tighter than your PUSSY IS!!!
regime is just a dickriding reign, saw ur pic tell ur mom not to have sex again!
you just a gay-lesb FOOL no man LOVES U, ur always left out like babies in test tubes
my flows be crazy like shady, you can have sex doin drugs and still not be a LAID-'E'[lady]
u cudnt hang with heavyweights if they had stacker2 bottles with pictures of your face
your like prehistoric villagers cuz you still havent seen the first date!
bitch please i'll have u attend all slim shady concerts and u still cudnt EM-SEE!!![mc]
i'll walk on your necter flowers and crush your 'bee'-leaves[beliefs]
even if you overdosed on sugar your still not a SWEET HEART!!!
just checkd your location and they got a new place for RETARDS!!! lol!

her location says laughin while pointing at you from afar

Da_Legend 10-24-03 04:45 PM

1 thing to kool, you only rhymed twice in your whole rhyme, is and again doesnt rhyme, tubes and lady doesnt rhyme, work on that, and lady, no offense or anything, but ur flow was choppy, some lines were 1 word too many

opener = kool
finisher = kool
structure = none
flow = none
punches = both
wordplay = lady
multis = lady
consistency = lady

vote = lady

you both need to work on structure, ur flows are choppy, no hatin

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324

J*KIDD 10-24-03 04:48 PM

yo good battle but there has got 2 b a winner

punches=killa
phores=killa
flow=divinity

vote=killa

Vote Gone.
-Axe

kool-killa 10-24-03 04:49 PM

WTF!!! its clear you dont know what the hell your talkin about herb....
lady and tubes were not meant to rhyme with each other.....maybe if you read the verse again youll see what rhymes........

u just a GAY LEST FOOL
NO MAN LOVES U
UR LEFT OUT LIKE BABIES IN TEST TUBES....

like that

Da_Legend 10-24-03 04:53 PM

learn to write yer verse better, thats y i cudnt even tell, like i said, both of u got weak structures

its choppy

Da_Legend 10-24-03 04:54 PM

and btw, dont get so heated up, learn to handle feedback

it aint da end of da world..................

kool-killa 10-24-03 04:56 PM

aight kool...........i cant edit the verse.....but it clearly rhymes....
i was peepin the elite and it says dont spit your verse to make it look ill like this

abCDabaCD
abCDabaCD
CDadadaCD

Dimez 10-24-03 05:52 PM

1-1?????


too bad it aint on the poll.........

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$pitacular 10-24-03 06:03 PM

YO YO YO I am shocked to see lady get merked... Lady you got madd skillz maybe you was havin a bad day but

kool mayne you ripped this shit hard G! shit was tiiiiight

punches - kool swinging like crazy
flow - cool again (lady work on tha flow, you hella tight though no beef, just notice in a lot of your battles your flow is irregular - oops, threw a punch)
originality - tie
enjoyability - kool
personals - close, but kool took it

vote = kool

props to both yall, hot shit

peace

Dimez 10-24-03 06:12 PM

How The Hell Did i Get Merked When His Info Is BS....?

W.e Man This Site Has Ridaz...

But I Dont Think I Lost To A Kid With No Skill

One

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Dimez 10-24-03 06:13 PM

Quote:
1 thing to kool, you only rhymed twice in your whole rhyme, is and again doesnt rhyme, tubes and lady doesnt rhyme, work on that, and lady, no offense or anything, but ur flow was choppy, some lines were 1 word too many



SO TRUE!


read my damn verse and stop riding


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