"5 yr. rememberance"
written awhile ago. but whenever i see a chance i pst this up somewhere. cuz i dont want my boy's memory to EVER be forgotten!
'5 year rememberance' chorus: 5 years/ full of so many tearz/ but ive let go of all my fears/ cuz i got some things i need you to hear/ verse 1: damn our livez had only just begun/ in life, bein at age 12 is like stil bein one/ but we had alot of fun/ in tha time we had/ its just to damn bad/ your life ended like that/ that ady wuz wack/ i wish i had a time machine so i could go back/ and change tha day/ make you not go that way/ damn i remember all of our times like it wuz yesterday/ that mornin you gave me a ride to school/ on your bike, even then we wuz cool/ we wuz neva actin a fool/ back when we wuz lil innocents/ but now im into shit/ ever since tha day you violently split/ chorus: 5 years/ full of so many tearz/ but ive let go of all my fears/ cuz i got some things i need you to hear/ verse 2: i didnt know how i should feel or wut to do/ i lost tha 1st poerson i called a TRUE/ that wuz all i knew/ damn mario i miss you/ i wish that i had complete power over a genie, so i could wish you/ back to tha erth/ some new type of rebirth/ man, how can things happen like this/ we wuz livin in bliss/ we neva thought that could happen/ but we wuz rong, cuz dogg, jay wuznt laughin/ he wuz almost in tears/ and i knew it wuz one of my werst fears/ cuz jay neva cried/ no matta wut it wuz he hed his hed high/ but for some reason this day he didnt wana try/ he looked like he lost all his pride/ he asked me if i knew and if we wuz cool/ i sed yes and then he told me tha bad news/ i couldn believe it, then i called yo crib/ your ma sed you no longer physically existed/ man my heart got twizted/ i miss you kid/ whyd you have to leave so sudden/ chorus: 5 years/ full of so many tearz/ but ive let go of all my fears/ cuz i got some things i need you to hear/ verse 3: you were to good for death/ you should still be alive and far from yo last breath/ maybe god wuz trying to teach me a lesson/ but man i wouldn listen it jus made me give up on pplz blessin/ cuz that wuz rong to do/ you had so much more planned for you/ if i eva met god id be demandin you/ come back to erth right now/ leave tha heaven to come back to tha ground/ where you could keep me/ company/ and we could gro up like originally/ planned/ b4 god through in his hand/ and decided to make turn into a bad man/ i still miss you, and think about you all tha time/ thinkin back on our memories getz me cryin/ i guess im still tryin/ to deal with tha fact that nobody wuz lyin/ wen they told me you were gone and i wanted to be blind n/ i kept thinkin about dyin/ i cant help but picture you up there flyin/ so high n/ lookin down on me/ makin a frown on me/ lookin down from a cloud on me/ cuz your eternally/ in my heart where youll alwayz be/ cuz it wuz alwayz we/ and now after today, it will have been 5 yearz/ why must god make so many people shed tears/ wut did you ever do rong/ nothing, so why did you take you along/ time ago/ mario i cant let you go/ im remminiscin on tha times we spent together/ tha time we spent chillin all summer and in tha cold weather/ playin basketball, baseball, and cath/ chillin wit paul talkin bout he bustin tekz/ and we got so much respect/ from all those people/ and your gone so life eemz decietful/ i dont know if your restin peaceful/ or if your up in heaven gleefull/ all i know, is that i am gonna see you/ at tha crossroadz when i get there/ i needa give you a hug and look at you and admire your hair/ and let you know otu of all my trues i only cared/ for one person above nate/ and that wuz, so ill see you at tha pearly gates/ R.I.P. MARIO J. RAPOSO OCTOBER 28TH 1985 ~ JUNE 16TH 1998 |
a good read but very simple you word selection could oif been more expressive of your emotion but other then that a good read.
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yea, i thought so too. it wasnt as good. at that time i was still kind of new at it. but now i've got a pretty good style, and a bigger vocab. his b-day is october 28th... so on his b-day i will be writing a special song for him. it would have been his 18th b-day. so that will be up here when its finished
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I felt this peice it was VERY simple and could use ALOT of touching up... but it got the message across... good drop, i didnt get bored reading it... but you could use some elevation... keep droppin homie, you remind me of myself when i started flowin
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