[Mysterious Ways]
 

Mysterious Ways

You can't quite put your finger on it. . Let alone grasp it
Don't know whats going to happen like when in a casket
Don't even ask it. . B'cos the reply will hide the answer
We need the fake one like tatoos b'cos we need a transfer
Too intricate for are brains to figure it so we gaze & wonder
Why did gays wander?I don't no but I spend days to ponder
Never confessing the plan even when under oath to god
Why is it when peoples the best they don't boast there god
Then when someones gross & odd they front their the best
Some hobos get caught by the police just to get an ar-rests
Somethings die-jested b'cos they get killed for being a joke
No humour to consumers b'cos life is seeming to be a hoax
These questions can drive mankind up the wall till they stall
And get to answer a question like what if I fall? So he falls
Answers enthral mankind. .Why are people called man-kind
When some purposely leave others feeble & almost blind
Foremost to find that they've seen the light. . But have they
Maybe we're already burnt out butts like earth is an ash tray
I can't evade the discrimination what invades my conciliation
Earth is moving while it seems I have to stay a preservation
Why do I crave respiration. . Do I really love life that much
But to sum up. . Some people are just too hard to figure out
Apart from wifes. .They always do numbers on they're spouse
Why do we scream & shout?

I Don't no exactly . . Alot of people can't do either. .
Non mathematically. .There achieving being a beaver. .

nice read, liked what you were sayin, some good use of vocab, not sure bout your rhymin scheme tho, maybe thats jus me, on the whole a decent drop.....keep it comin dawg............

this was nice dog .. everything like i say all the other times, lol .. shit is nice and on point ...

now! .. we know you can stay on topic ..

now is when you have fun

do some braggadocious shit .. do some comedy shit ..

do some story lines!

change up your scheme a little bit to see how versatile you are ..

pz..1

I thought I heard those first 3 lines b 4 but it's a fuckin ill verse after them nice vocab,flow,structure and shit, keep droppin...
peace
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Thankyou. .As always replied^^

this was a nice read but your looking for what was wrong so i will speak on that........
B'cos the reply will hide the answer
We need the fake one like tatoos b'cos we need a transfer
MADE NO SENCE TO ME......
Never confessing the plan even when under oath to god
Why is it when peoples the best they don't boast there god
UNDERSTOOD BUT WONDER WHATS ITS' POINT

OTHER THEN THAT AS USUAL A GREAT READ......

The first line was a metaphor bcos fake tatoos are caled transfers. . The first line of the second misunderstanding was well saying how fake people can be. . The second line was questioning something. .

Pz

U have a ill avvy

But U Need To Elevate Drasticly!!

Damn this was WACk as fuck..































































































































































I was jokin..

And i think this was a nice read, ..i was understandin ur metta's, was a nice twist in ur verse,...and u used damn nice vocab...and u stayed well on-topic, ..flow was on point...

Dope read...

Props..

Up. . :)