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MeNTiLL 10-24-03 11:34 AM

MeNTiLL vs **~SynText~**
 
10 - 16 Lines
Explained Votes
3-0 KO
1st To 5 Wins
Post ASAP

All other reg. rules apply

Consider this as my checc in ... Peace

MeNTiLL 10-24-03 12:54 PM

I never let the record fool me ... Wat the fucc? Is this nigga kiddin?
But I compared ur wins 2 ur skillz ... And U got seven too many
When this battle's over ... Ask me if U need help spellin' defeated
Ur wacc But shhh That's a secret ... No wonder IJL tried their best 2 keep it
So Beat it ... And no im not Quotin' the song I mean ur career in rappin
He quoted a wacc line ... & put a gun next to it so he could hear clappin
I hope when U decided 2 battle MeNTiLL U weren't plannin' on leavin no scars
Cuz if U were ... Then next to ur name ain't the only place U seein' them stars
Shit on you so badly ... Im sorry man But see ... I had to
Cuz even ur inner soul know's U wacc ... Look at ur sig ... It's screamin' at you

Blah ... There ... Drop as soon as U can ... Peace

**~SynText~** 10-25-03 04:34 PM

this kids FINISH the END is near like Apocalypse thoughts...
your gettin ROBBED ya not ill so you had to QUOTE NIMROD~/~


aight aight

Like 12 yr old kids this cats gets kicks but ya spittin(cummin) Early...
call ELIABETH HURLEY maybe that SHe Devil can give ya WIShes so L'2 you won't have to worry~/~
FAG with ya weak personals thought you had an arsonel till PAY called and REported YOU(biting)....
Heres a line to Quote SYN ripped my shit with more words then documents in courtrooms~/~
deformed fool REGIME sucks IJL would murder ya set.....
LOOK AT YOUR SIG with that ENOUGH SAID~/~
so Call out with HEsitation cause like SESAME street ya CATCHIN L's.....
this kids a bullet SPONGE like beaches ya only good for CATCHIN SHELLS~/~

Dope Wax 10-26-03 02:55 AM

Please. . wtf is Syntext doing in EFL?

Anyways. .
Quote:
Ur wacc But shhh That's a secret ... No wonder IJL tried their best 2 keep it

^That took it hands down. The rest of MentiLL's verse was rather filler-esque.

Syntext however came with lines that were played like in 1991. . Your wording is horrible. . Bars are so uneven it's distressing. . Get to the fucking point, keep it short, sweet and concise. . You'll be much better then. . Also ditch the caps and "~".

V - Mentill

MeNTiLL 10-27-03 11:10 AM

Thanks for the vote ... 1-0 Me ... Can we get some more? Peace ...............................................

**~SynText~** 10-27-03 12:02 PM

ayo this battle is VOID if you gonna take a HATE vote man sorrry onez this is VOID i'mma talk to a mod right quick

MeNTiLL 10-28-03 11:54 AM

LoL ... Battle is VOID? Blah ... Watever ... Take that vote way then ... 0-0 ...

Now ... can we get some more votes? Peace

Dope Wax 10-29-03 02:00 AM

Hate vote in what way might I ask? I stated the facts clean and clear. Please, if there was any hate whatsoever in this battle it would be towards MeNTiLL. . lol because he gave me my first loss ever :(
So STFU

MeNTiLL 10-29-03 11:16 AM

Can a mod clean this up from the bullshit ... And can we get more votes on this battle? They'll be appreciated ... Peace

Feeble Minded 11-01-03 02:22 PM

vote- mentill

there was only one good line in this battle, its what dope wax quoted...thats it..the only enjoyable thing. yall need to elevate some before battling in elite anymore...

but yeah.. vote mentill.

shay-d 11-01-03 02:32 PM

my vote doesnt ount, i cant vote here. thanks for your time anyway...


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MeNTiLL 11-01-03 02:58 PM

Blah ... 3-0 KO ... Done ... Unless U gonna bitch somemore ... Can this get closed ... Peace .......................................

Dimez 11-01-03 11:51 PM

MeNTiLL

I never let the record fool me ... Wat the fucc? Is this nigga kiddin?
But I compared ur wins 2 ur skillz ... And U got seven too many
When this battle's over ... Ask me if U need help spellin' defeated
Ur wacc But shhh That's a secret ... No wonder IJL tried their best 2 keep it

^^^^^^ That Doesent Even Rhyme And I Dont Know Where u Goin Wit Ya Flow..

So Beat it ... And no im not Quotin' the song I mean ur career in rappin
He quoted a wacc line ... & put a gun next to it so he could hear clappin
^^^^ Now That Was Sick!

I hope when U decided 2 battle MeNTiLL U weren't plannin' on leavin no scars
Cuz if U were ... Then next to ur name ain't the only place U seein' them stars
^^^^^ LoL kindaq gay but okay~

Shit on you so badly ... Im sorry man But see ... I had to
Cuz even ur inner soul know's U wacc ... Look at ur sig ... It's screamin' at you
^^^ Ummmm that dont rhyme

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[b]**~SynText~**[/quote]

1st thing i gotta tell u is .. get rid of the choppy dots and hypens and //
then it would look so much better.. work on the structure

Like 12 yr old kids this cats gets kicks but ya spittin(cummin) Early...
call ELIABETH HURLEY maybe that SHe Devil can give ya WIShes so L'2 you won't have to worry~/~
^ That Was Good Multis!

FAG with ya weak personals thought you had an arsonel till PAY called and REported YOU(biting)....
Heres a line to Quote SYN ripped my shit with more words then documents in courtrooms~/~
^^^ that dont rhyme...

deformed fool REGIME sucks IJL would murder ya set.....
LOOK AT YOUR SIG with that ENOUGH SAID~/~
so Call out with HEsitation cause like SESAME street ya CATCHIN L's.....
^^^^^ you just dissed my crew.. not a good move

this kids a bullet SPONGE like beaches ya only good for CATCHIN SHELLS~/~
^ Played


BOO!~
LoL

..............................

vote= mentil

Aisle Phive 11-02-03 12:08 AM

Vote- Mentill For Obvious Reasons... Punches, Personals, Everything Buried This Kid... Not Much Of An Explanation Needed.

more detailed explanation than this is always needed. ill let it count this time.
-feeble

Axiom 11-05-03 01:42 AM

Mentill Murdered This... No Explanation Needed...












































































But I Will Explain My Vote Because I Always Bitch At Kids For Not Explainin... Mentill Was Just Personal The Whole Way Through, Don't Know Why Feeble Said He Only Had One Good Line... All Of Them Made Me Smirk... Syn? What Can I Say... Keep Your "Skills" A Secret... Bad Everything.

Vote=Mentill.


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