a old piece i found on my computer lol
 

its actually a dope concept i never finished it, at the time i wasnt that good. i might re-do it now that im a better writer.

its time to examine this disease we call the streets
believed to be contagious spreading as we speak
no cures been reached, were still seeking some answers
the streets were made tuff they never break or fracture
but it doesnt matter we dont have time to play games
the price of fame is informants coughing up names
so many hearts feel pain but that just part of the issue
if death miss you your still covered in scar tissue
shots bust like blood vesicles as you sleep in the night
designed to make you restless for the rest of your life
then you ride in the back strapped until ICU
its true if you aint tuff people test your physical
in critical condition taking your last breath
in a place were cops make cardiac arrests

^ i was using medical terms mixed in with the streets LOL i think i was 16 when i wrote it, but i forgot about it and never finished it.

think i should re-do it?

Hmm.. pretty good shit...

You best start posting in here you hoe.

Not bad...
Kinda seemed too focused on vocab now and then but good

Peep: Betrayed By Faith

wow chrit your fast.

dont worry about breaking it down, im not looking for good replys cause that about two years old and im alot better now, i was just wondering if i should re do it

^^^
May as well redo it...

Thats the hardest part of an open mic..
Finding a topic...

And you already have it..
So write damnit

definitely re-do it.......