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CarsonJet -v- Thorn (experienced votes only)
LandMark.....60th win possibility.....
10-15 lines max.... You spit first.......... normal voting rules good luck-and check in....i will also.... |
Yeah This is my Check In Jet
I will spit either tonight or tomorrow, just got back from a Tourni .........Peace It.......... |
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Affraid to Spit Blind, Cuz your bad like Eyes Aimed by Lazers
Im Battling a Fool who's Username sounds like a Company Razor I'll embarress this Vet like Goofy Parents his Cheeks will Turnin Redish Shitting Your-self so scared U'll need more Dippers than a R.Kelly Fetish I'll Drop a Hot Verse, Carson couldnt do the Same If Double Dared Im A-Head of this Kid, like Un and Circumsized Penis' Compared U couldnt Spit Dirty As a Public Toilett Seat Stall Im doubting this Fag Like Unlucky Shook 8-Balls Carsons Skilled Abilities are Low to the Ground like Early Morning Fog Your Boring and get Slepped on more Than Human Society Lost Dogs Winnings an Impossibility kid Like Gambling at Casino's Diceless Y's Ur Avatar say Master Card when Ya spits and Even Priceless? C's Worse than Last Place Teams, You couldnt Stun me Usin High Beems This Battle was a Sceam, Like Jews Awaitin Showers But Breathin Gas Steams The Only Time U'll get Thumbs Up is co-operatin with Hitch Hikes If u were a Real Vet and Not wack No1 woulda Dissed Ur Open Mic (In his sig.......The MOnkey Dream lmao) Lets go bro |
simply sick'10 str8 vics 1 loss then another win
musta stopped an taken a break inbetween to whipe ur chin... Way i flip think i'm equipped wit fins..dis kids a sin.. don't he get the hint?..go back to battlin 0-3's... that way u can please ya mind wit lyrical ease.. Cus u flow wit more Bark den red wood trees... u fuckin flea..- Flea the scene...notha pre-teen tryna act mean on R&B.. Face it Thorn...U just a part of me cus i Rose... couldnt De Feat me if u had 10 times amount of toe's... Loosen ya corn'rows and start thinkin in a logical sense.. cus from what I read u aint makin any to pay the rent... I see this as a home to Vent to an extent... but when Character like u enter..I force wit torque makin u wanna repent |
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Wordplay- Thorn
Punches-Thorn Multies- Neither Metas- Thorn Personals- Thorn Flow- Carsonjet Favorite Line- Winnings an impossibility kid like gambling at casinos diceless//Y's Ur avatar say mastercard when ya spits and even priceless Vote- Thorn. He had better wordplay and harder punches and more personals hit this up- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87936 |
gotta go wit thorn....
better puches and better flow jet came a lil choppy "Winnings an Impossibility kid Like Gambling at Casino's Diceless" wha if you playin slots?? A head line was nasty...... |
Flow - Jet... nice rhythm
Punches - Thorn... more of em an well thought out Personals - Neither... each verse was a bit general Multis - Neither... it dont matter tho Meta4s - Multis... that Jew line was sik! Originality - Both... came fresh Creativity - Thorn... nice imagery Wordplay - Thorn... beautiful! Rhyme scheme - Jet... easy to follow Vote = Thorn Crackin battle... fairly close all round... but Thorn had some truely original witty punches... great concepts wit the Jew line an the Mastercard line. Peep this Thorn (Carson already voted): http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2 -applauds- |
Thorn - You Didnt Drop Nothing Special...Had Some Nice Punches And Decent Attempt At Wordplay But When I First Read It...I Thought You Were Gonna Get Beat...
...But Thats Not The Case...What Happened Carson??...You Started Off Nicely...The Second Lime Brought A Smile But Then It Went Down Hill...Play Lines..De Feat...Come On...You Know You Can Do Better...You Had Decent Wordplay And Mediocre Punches.. So...With A Better Verse.. Vote - Thorn |
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flow=carson
structure=thorn punches=thorn creativity=thorn wordplay=thorn overall=thorn thorn took this cuz he just threw mad punches---it was pretty much a merkin shuld name this kid thorn punchgalore and he's creative too--vote=thorn peep my battle out with skrawni--- |
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