Sex Song
 

Gotta sex drive like a X5, Get the legs high spead em out, Put it in their mouth so they dont shout, Dirty dance with a dirty song/
I love to see women up in they thong, Goin deep throat, on a bed, car, on the water in my boat/
Thats a cruise ship and its ready to depart/
This is sex games ma aint no games of the heart/
Cause ya know I dont love you I'm tryna get in them pants/
I wasn't feelin ya that much at the club in fact I didnt wanna dance/
I jus wanted to know if you'd give this man a chance/
To use your jeans as a mirror so I could see whats in them pants/
Not in those Jeans..This aint Ginuine or a remake/
Just promise me girl you dont think that this is love that we make/
Its just sex, old and dirty, rough and flirty, down and out, balls in mouth and dick in ass/
Yo shorty you mind if my boy jumps in too I think I remembered he asked/
You sittin thinkin about your lonely past when your father used to touch ya in innapropriate ways/
Well ma he's jus sick you'll like how you feel today/
My bed's a double king size ready and clean/
For you to be at the foot of my bed suckin the penis clean/
Condoms you say? I dont believe in that word/
Lets go back to the caveman days where condoms were absurd/
Raw Dawg is all there is I'm sorry no tires/
And I'm sorry about sayin I'd go easy, trust me I aint no liar/
After one pill of ecstacy we gon be on our way/
With some Tangueray and Tonic and a drop of ocean spray/
This is how you remind me of a girl I fucked today/
Cause the last girl that sucked me off my dick got stuck on her labret hahahahahah/

I liked the gereneral lines at sex. .Just casusally spittin on it & found this the type of thing you'd like to be played in a club

But. .The flow was really quite bad & the structure was horrible. .Sry, no hate but the truth & this was very elementry

Pz. .Elevate & stay up

the content was there the everything came in,,,,the flow fell and structure but like myself we have styles that may not beunderstood unless we spit them....stay up and keep postin i remember you from before i know you an ill cat.

Thats a good topic... but no flow whatsoever... some of your lines were 1 1/2 times longer then others and some were shorter...

I also found you rhymed the same words a couple times... and thats my pet peeve, unless u got a multi to back it up.

I give this a 4/10.