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Defend 10-26-03 01:47 PM

It's done
 
I'm back from my plane flight distributing drugs across the seas/
Signing checks with my hand making money that's the color green/
Gotta kill these obscene bitches, niggas who bitch, turn around run they mouth now they ass a snitch/
I'm Getting rich letting niggas do my dirty work/
I fuck with cops the woman man the love to twirk/
The man getting me guns when i run out of ammo a dirty buisness hooking me up with some cameras/
Go to court i'm found guilty never lasting the whole day/
I make a phone call i'm getting out the same day/
I Never pay got secrets along side with the Da/
20 bullets i spray clearing the whole way/ Some niggas gay yeah i fuck with yah to/
Nigga disrespect call the nigga pooh I tell him what's up after catcher getting fuck in the but/
Loss your virginity listen next time dont fuck with us/

self 10-26-03 08:25 PM

That was...great.


Original.

Purposeful.

Great Work!

Dirty Sally 10-26-03 09:45 PM

Keep dropping open mics and you'll elevate. You lack wordplay, metas and multies which makes open mics more interesting to read. Hopefully you got the potential to become better. Stay active...


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