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LM vs Metball4 (drop a link)
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10 lines No d/r....etc I spit first All votes or comments must be explained Check in then I'll keystyle somethin Here's another battle for ya'll to vote or comment on: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87842 |
did u forget the poll ..................or did u on purpose.....................
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Shit my bad....I'll set up again............................................. .......................................
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^^^Ignore that^^^. Youngs talkin shit. Metball check in................................................ .........................
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If he's checked in by the time I've typed somethin up then good....if not then HURRY UP
Heres my verse anyway....just a little keystyle: Hey this herb comes from the j-crew....who are they and what do they do/ (profile) Are they some sort of gay rights group....i bet you love seein men get fucked in the poop shoot/ Fuck it I bet you accompany you boyfriend to the loo too/ Seriously tho it dont matter coz when people see how whack you are....the mods will give you the boot/ You'll be kicked off this site coz your rhymes are so shite/ Your punches hurt bout as much as a hampster bite/ (not much) This will probably be a KO by the end of the night/ Coz lets face it....you aint gonna put up much of a fight are you/ All your rhymes are played....try and think of somethin new/ OK last line....it's time to see what you can do/. Vote or comment on this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87842 |
Im here, and here it is:
im laughin at yo rhymes/just to pass the time/ cuz i aint seen a good line/ from yo mouth.. so listen to mine/ I know yo kind/ wander around tryin to find/ someone worse than you/ u cant, u suck, its just hurtin you/ heres the rap platter im servin you/ y u talkin bout my crew/ cuz u lose/ to any of 'em/ u like to be butt done... so u like man lovin/ u aint nothin/ so step off my clique.. n go back to ur husband! What, do you still think you could beat me wit yah preschool rhymes dogg you aint even phaze me wit none of yah lines tell me do u write ryhmes wit tha protection of ya parents?/ You tried to rap, and u feel into the gap bro...game over 10 |
First two lines of this quote from his verse didnt even rhyme and that rhyme about man lovin...played. just dont use it.
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ok this i liked from met ball ive seen it but not that played by newbs so. gj. Quote:
so basicly imma pick LM cuz he hit harder his punches flowed together he was good in the begining but after that he just fell off http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...08&pagenumber=1 fair vote this please ty |
i would vote for LM but i cant vote so sry
overall i think u where better than him :::::::::POKE:::::::: |
Stop putting ( Drop a Link ) in your battle titles. Name vs Name threads only fool.
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alright i think LM got this
opener-lm...other guy didnt even rhyme! closer-lm punches-lm personals-tie vocab-tie overal-lm yo i did this honestly so hit mine up honeslty too http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6845#post866845 thanks peace |
yo meat u need to get your lyrics strait u fell off so many times dawg i i don't think any mc would vote you wit dat, but i do agree with ...Insert.. er one line was tight "u cant, u suck, its just hurtin you/ heres the rap platter im servin you"
opener-LM, meat dawg u didn't evan ryme closer-LM punches-LM personals-this was close but LM took it wit "Hey this herb comes from the j-crew....who are they and what do they do/ (profile) Are they some sort of gay rights group....i bet you love seein men get fucked in the poop shoot/" vocab-Tie overal-LM sorry meat but don't matta neway i can't vote, But if i could id vote LM. tight battle... couldda been betta but not da worst. |
Wordplay- LM
Punches- LM Metas- neither Multies- neither Personals- LM Vote- LM Weak battle on metball's account but if you keep battling your sure to elevate. LM got you on this one. Return the favor please- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87936 Thx DS |
Yo thanks for votin to everyone who did and thanks to everyone who dropped comments.................................
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