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LM 10-26-03 04:13 PM

LM vs Metball4 (drop a link)
 
Rules are:
10 lines
No d/r....etc
I spit first
All votes or comments must be explained


Check in then I'll keystyle somethin


Here's another battle for ya'll to vote or comment on:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87842

YoUnG-sUsPeCt 10-26-03 04:14 PM

did u forget the poll ..................or did u on purpose.....................
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LM 10-26-03 04:16 PM

Shit my bad....I'll set up again............................................. .......................................

LM 10-26-03 04:17 PM

^^^Ignore that^^^. Youngs talkin shit. Metball check in................................................ .........................

LM 10-26-03 04:39 PM

If he's checked in by the time I've typed somethin up then good....if not then HURRY UP

Heres my verse anyway....just a little keystyle:

Hey this herb comes from the j-crew....who are they and what do they do/ (profile)
Are they some sort of gay rights group....i bet you love seein men get fucked in the poop shoot/
Fuck it I bet you accompany you boyfriend to the loo too/
Seriously tho it dont matter coz when people see how whack you are....the mods will give you the boot/
You'll be kicked off this site coz your rhymes are so shite/
Your punches hurt bout as much as a hampster bite/ (not much)
This will probably be a KO by the end of the night/
Coz lets face it....you aint gonna put up much of a fight are you/
All your rhymes are played....try and think of somethin new/
OK last line....it's time to see what you can do/.



Vote or comment on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87842

metball4 10-26-03 06:07 PM

Im here, and here it is:

im laughin at yo rhymes/just to pass the time/
cuz i aint seen a good line/ from yo mouth.. so listen to mine/
I know yo kind/ wander around tryin to find/ someone worse than you/
u cant, u suck, its just hurtin you/ heres the rap platter im servin you/
y u talkin bout my crew/ cuz u lose/ to any of 'em/ u like to be butt done... so u like man lovin/
u aint nothin/ so step off my clique.. n go back to ur husband!
What, do you still think you could beat me wit yah preschool rhymes
dogg you aint even phaze me wit none of yah lines
tell me do u write ryhmes wit tha protection of ya parents?/
You tried to rap, and u feel into the gap bro...game over
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DªÖ 10-26-03 06:15 PM

First two lines of this quote from his verse didnt even rhyme and that rhyme about man lovin...played. just dont use it.
Quote:
tell me do u write ryhmes wit tha protection of ya parents?/
You tried to rap, and u feel into the gap bro...game over
y u talkin bout my crew/ cuz u lose/ to any of 'em/ u like to be butt done... so u like man lovin/

ok this i liked from met ball ive seen it but not that played by newbs so. gj.
Quote:
u cant, u suck, its just hurtin you/ heres the rap platter im servin you/


so basicly imma pick LM
cuz he hit harder
his punches flowed together
he was good in the begining
but after that he just fell off
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...08&pagenumber=1
fair vote this please ty

AWB 10-26-03 07:17 PM

i would vote for LM but i cant vote so sry
overall i think u where better than him
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The End 10-26-03 07:51 PM

Stop putting ( Drop a Link ) in your battle titles. Name vs Name threads only fool.

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Emerge 10-26-03 08:07 PM

alright i think LM got this

opener-lm...other guy didnt even rhyme!
closer-lm
punches-lm
personals-tie
vocab-tie
overal-lm

yo i did this honestly so hit mine up honeslty too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6845#post866845

thanks peace

Yaz 10-26-03 08:49 PM

yo meat u need to get your lyrics strait u fell off so many times dawg i i don't think any mc would vote you wit dat, but i do agree with ...Insert.. er one line was tight "u cant, u suck, its just hurtin you/ heres the rap platter im servin you"

opener-LM, meat dawg u didn't evan ryme
closer-LM
punches-LM
personals-this was close but LM took it wit "Hey this herb comes from the j-crew....who are they and what do they do/ (profile)
Are they some sort of gay rights group....i bet you love seein men get fucked in the poop shoot/"
vocab-Tie
overal-LM

sorry meat but don't matta neway i can't vote, But if i could id vote LM. tight battle... couldda been betta but not da worst.

Dirty Sally 10-26-03 09:22 PM

Wordplay- LM
Punches- LM
Metas- neither
Multies- neither
Personals- LM
Vote- LM

Weak battle on metball's account but if you keep battling your sure to elevate. LM got you on this one. Return the favor please-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87936

Thx DS

LM 10-27-03 04:34 AM

Yo thanks for votin to everyone who did and thanks to everyone who dropped comments.................................

Peace!!!

LM 10-27-03 06:21 AM

Uppin for votes (1)............................................... ..........................


Peace!!!

LM 10-27-03 09:13 AM

Uppin for votes (2)............................................... ..........................


Peace!!!


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