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APRENTICE vs. Herb
cough..i mean herbal
ok homo ur rules no dr no hate no pmin to vote iight then lets go ^^thats all my rules show me sumin |
20 lines no more no less
none of ure dick riders can vote other than that quit acting like a bitch yo goodluck and post ure shit by midnight i dont care when as long as its by midnight ill probably drop a lot earlier than then but thats the time i always set for battles also voting as follows: opener- closer- creativity- punches- personals- vocab- originality- overall- thats it yo goodluck....peace |
so im spittin first??????????blind spits lets spit like now............................................... .................................................. .......
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how long from now?? ait then if u want to i had to do something but i can key something up real quick if thats wat u want??
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I'll set this Apprentice will confess my boundless mind/
Flawless rhyme design, verbals that confine// Spits are glorified, no lie you'll be cooked and fried/ Right before your eyes... when you criticize// Much to your demise I elevate and rise/ Life without knowledge is death in disguise// So everytime u grab a pen your pulse goes flat/ Once the KID now it’s squared? and you're twice as wack// By vain ambition I make my punches profuse/ You lose couldn't sustain if ya had help from the muse// You choose...remain on RB but what's the use? / Call me sire cuz my fire left you a burnt out fuse// you? merk me? U couldn't hurt me or work me/ only way ud beat me if I was your Dick and u jerked me// 2 KOs ima bout to make it three seriously u missin me/ I’m da G.O.A.T....cuz i eat eat eat emcees// Predicting what you’ll say,”herb is fag and he is gay”/ look son dissin on my name has been done and played// for reals my rhymes penetrate roughly like sodomy/ Instead of a verse apprentice is sure to post an apology// |
his name used to be APPRENTICE THA KID now its APPRENTICE2 -- squared simbol
alright quick key up cuz u wanted it now and shit now its ure turn homie |
IIght Herb lets get this started :Wit
Highly potent, venemous shit/ toatin punches...and blendin in kicks/ if u think u hott, ima heetseeka-ya the ultimatum bitch, u get hit/ against me if u think u flow cold/ ur spits will freeze and choke, before they even leave ur throat/ Rings of Merkin....uve now seen the "O"/(the ring) How can u ponder to battle me....the aftermath will verbally haunt ya/ ya stick to try to feed ma lines, like users...to the rb sponser/ Speed it up: Enter this death pool..of spits/ the waters fine...like bacteria.....to immune deficiency kids/ now if this herb continues to creep/ countdown 12 nocturnal flows will have u scared to sleep/ fuck a crew, and fuck 2 peeps/ me and ma aprentice is rollin tooooo deep/ Get into it: now that im blunderin on, im inplodin inner ears...and humblin wrong/ so my rhymes stay right, like ur rhymes is hopless/ like excuse me and move over miss lisa lopez/ i cant let u get ripped by the aprentice in me/ my verse will make u feel like an invisible mcee/ Finish Have u wish ur spits was never seen, like Monica Lewinsky/ My text is rippin out ya eye sockets, ya essence is all wack stop it/ Herbal moanin in the shower, wit shampoo bottles leaned and prodded/ (prodded:leaning against) |
^^^^not bad of a drop but ur whole shit was kinda played that name diss was hott but aprentice 2 means aprentice 2 the arts anyway nice drop
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ummmmmmmmmm i said 20 lines not 22!!! :mad:
i knew u were gonna some some "shampoo" shit haha its all good even though its played anyway its time to vote people and please do it honestly |
Aprentice² got this one easy man/ i think its just the
that he has a better knowledge of flow/ -------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------- |
apprentice u will agree wit me that that vote dont count right??
i know we both dont like it when people do that shit so ama go report that alright?? anyway nice drop not my style but it was ku |
opener-Aprentice²
closer-Herbal creativity-Aprentice² punches-Aprentice² personals-Herbal vocab-Herbal originality-Aprentice² overall-Aprentice² VOTE=Aprentice² I FELT HE HAD A BETTER VERSE OVERALL BUT GOOD JOB TO BOTH OF YA |
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La La, you know, you need to stop reading my mind, it just aint cool. Please hit this up, noobs need love to: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87268 |
Aprentice is DQ'd from this battle. You don't go in threads saying to 'hit this up and ill return the favor'. Read the rules. If I see you do this in another post.. You are banned.
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