Girls
 

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^"GIRLS"

Beat: Art-Writaz "Sweat Glands"
Song is for the upcoming compilation artwritaz is workin' on...

leave me feedback, an' i'll peep your tracks..

I wasn't really feelin this cut, some of yer other shit on your page was tighter. The reason i wasn't feelin it is cause the hook seemed a lil' boring and the theme is just played out right now, that's all anyone talks about is bitches and girls and ice and drinks and clubbin', The song just didn't hold my attention well. Just my opinion don't hate me for it, and if you do, well, sorry kid.

i don't hate you ... lol... thank for the comment 'bout the hook tho, kinda what i was thinkin'... if you didn't listen to the whole thing, the 3rd an' 4th verse are the best, so i suggest listnin' to them

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this was .....

blah..

the way you enunciate your words is wierd....not feelin....

flow and delivery are shaky...

and the beat sounds liek CASTLEVANIA!...lmfao

OK drop i guess....kinda real blah...

chorus sucked

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some of the stuff on page is alrite but that was pretty shit dawg, no hate jus tellin it as it was!

ya ya... lol... i know it wasn't my best track, thx for comments.. 1

s'all good dawg... i forget what the track is we workin on.. lol.. i been doin' alot of studio shit l8ly too, tha's why i ain't do a track on here in so long.... but you, hit me up on aim when u get the chance.. 1