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shay-d 10-27-03 10:22 PM

shay-d vs. Mc-UsKi
 
8-15 lines
no hate, d/r etc...
6 vote win
3 votes in row= auto
i spit first

shay-d 10-27-03 10:25 PM

yo... this kid has no chance , against me he'll wish he never joined this website// he says hes 13 but everyone thinks hes 11... there is no way he can put up a fight// only reason he's battlin me over internet is because he knows his ass would get kicked in flesh// damn... its time to grow up and stop copyin rhymes , u might as well give up cause my flows are always fresh.

im out of ur level , go home, ur to young//
u shouldnt have battled me , im here to blame when we all hear on the news that a 11 year old kid was hung// shit... sorry about callin u eleven// ur personalitly lowers ur age down to seven.

-uski- 10-27-03 10:36 PM

yo dawg y u callen me 11 u no ima 13 ima UsKi//
ima goin to rip u up because ima way betta EmCee//
u shouldn't of battled me and called me 11 now u gonna get it//
i can tell ur a noob from ur rhyme y r dey sh shit//
look at me ima incredable and invinceble//
even thou ima younge mi rhyme r very capable//
ull neva see me comming cause ur shitten//
i hav herd most ov dat shit b4 dawg its gotta be pre-written//
dawg is dat da best shit u can write dawg u gotta be kinden//
dawg u now i dont like to rhyme mi frend//
but all i no wen ima finished it gonna be ur end//
u betta be glag ima not dat pissed//
cause all ur shoot on me missed//
dawg y u try to diss me bout mi age//
and i saw u dawg scriblen on dat page//

done..

shay-d 10-27-03 10:42 PM

yall vote.............................................. ..... :) :( :S :) .................................................. ..............

DEsTIn2dEsTroY 10-27-03 10:49 PM

kinda funny how the 2 of you try to act like you are not some dummies //
displayeezzz of your fate show that you are fake//
so feel the wake from the earth as i create friction like an earth quake//
leave you two in true devestastion wack humans to this race I be erasen//
what's all this bull shit that you wanna bee's be chasin//
true ly desrcasen the 4 elements creations//
young minds spittin rhymes so dirty it will take a vacukm to consume //
and by that time you'll already be facen your doom//
so stop selling rhymes like imposter perfuim//
and stand slear as i relase the fear from you fucking queer//
stop acting like you all are "sic" after two beer's
it an't new here i've been crushin for mad years//
now hear the cheers from the two of your gurlies all dressed up pretty//
laugh at both your rhymes because they sound real shitty//

you both suck in my apion but hey , who cares

-uski- 10-27-03 10:49 PM

yall vote...............................ME............
.............UsKi..........not shay-d.......

Yaz 10-27-03 10:54 PM

iight this was a weird n0ob battle but ya...

shay-D:
dawg u had no flow, no good punchs, terrible ryme scheme(u said everything again and again). Your finish was hella good dawg. But u need to elevate majorly dawg like serios, get crackin.

Mc-UsKi
u got some serois shit to work out, if shayd would put less sylibols in his finishes he would have my vote, u had some good punchs and shit, but u could use a lot of work yourself dawg.

flow-shayd
rhymescheme-uski
personals-shayd
finisher-shayd
vocab-uski
punchs- not veary well but uski
Over all-Uski

Id set a vote but i don't got enough posts, so ya w/e least it some ways to help u out.

Peace out (\1/)

-uski- 10-27-03 11:02 PM

DEsTIn2dEsTroY yo wdf is wit dat rhyme dis aint ur battle dawg so y da fuk did u post u rhyme in our battle..


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