Not Sure !!unfinished!!
 

im aggravated and aggitated, moms glad-i-made-it, its too bad- your-faded, from my mind evaded, through time-i-skated, too fast ive stated//

that my life just flew-by, with nothin to do and i knew-why, cause i lacked tha motivation from bein too-high, no askin you-why//

i realize my mistakes, but it really takes a man to realize what it- takes, to put on tha brakes, and slow down to aknowledge ya fate//

real-life and still-i cant find tha will but i still-try, so one day i will-fly to another place where my will-dies//

lies cant be told, outlined bold, print, scent of aloe vera and mint, sprint to tha nearest vent, bow down upon your knees and start to repent, your spent//

drug addiction, thugs bitchin about there love-of-fiction. but tha snow u sniffin acounts for tha sudden-twitchin.......

thought it was structured alright, and some good multis, and your flow was on point except for the second last bar, which seemed stretched compared to the rest, but i just wasn't feelin it,....peace!

well if you dont like it then give constructive sriticism on how it could be better but its not finished.uppin^^^