about my mother, (r.i.p) I love you
 

(vs. 1)
On this path of life, road to wealth
I'm forced to walk alone
My feelings still unknown
Wondering who I'm gonna be
Who I want next to me is you
Lost you at 21 now I'm 22
Just proof to me the years still pass by
Only God Can tell me why
But til then I'm gonna struggle
Cause it's hard to carry on
When nobody loves you
All my secrets, who to tell
But on my shoulder you dwell
Angel wings spread afar
Still keep me safe if I fell
You see I'm lost
But nobody cares if they can find me
In your Cross
It holds your memory
It reminds me
Begging God please
Pull my body and soul apart
It isn your love
The only things to fix this hole in my heart

*chorus*

Momma, your my world
the air that i breathe
the blood that i bleed
part of you is part of me
destiny, put us together
god had took us apart
now that your gone
so is a piece of my heart


(vs. 2)
Only a mothers love
Can fix her first sone's broke heart
July 15th
The day that we were first broke apart
And I still see your face in my eyes
I know your looking down from heavenly skies
And in my dreans you send replies
And in prayers I send questions
Still ask for direction
Still ask for your blessing
When my wife's expecting
But I can't put i passed me
Death's everlasting
And life's just a moment in time
A speck in this world
Name her Daisy if expecting a girl
Never give her nothing less than a pearl
I'll follow your footsteps
From dirtroads to streets of gold
Eternally you're gonna be in my soul
*chourus*


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Fate is inevitable, everything happens for a reason

I love this. You mom will be proud. You rhymescheme was great and every word fitted together perfectly. Good work.

Can you check out and drop a comment on my open mic peice. It's called Mom I'm sorry. It's written in a different style to this and I want some feed back on it.
And I'm gonna pm you soon askin you somethin. Keep checkin you pm's.
Once again good work on this I enjoyed readin it and sorry bout your mom.


Peace!!!