I Shot Ya (diss is ridiculous)
 

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dis shyt is hot to def....feedback plz


i just learned about cool edit and made a banger...shyt, dis can go fo a legend.

HOLLA

Please....rhyme on beat at least....talk about whatever...but rhyme on beat...

NEVER again use a big verse

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Lyrics was dope, n i felt ya tone/emotion...could be on the hits a bit more but I thought it was aight. chorus wasn't anything special, but could be cus the beat don't change through it.

for u'r second beat tho i though ya have real potential.

u want custom beats for no charge hit me up.

Phate2148

pc

nice drop, i like this beat it sound good wit most cas on it,
it could make justin timberlake, sound grimy.....

nice lyrics, though, i like the delivery.

nice drop.
pz

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"I'm just the boy that u went down on/
and ya sluts gotta pay me da fuck from now on//"

damn son that whole bar came straight from a cassidy freestyle.

plus u was spittin off beat.

My only advice other than stop biting, and learn how to rap is...

Never hype up your track like that in a thread.. when i see that, im expecting THE best.. and im always disapointed...

but yeah.. learn how to flow on beat.. the beat is dope but you ruined it...

fuckin biter

too bad you banned dog, I was feelin' this man. THEY don't be feelin this shit dog, yeah you coulda been mor on the the beat but it's mix tape quality doe

PS I never heard of cassidy...so he's nobody.

you're not flowin to the beat

Shit was wack.