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Feeble Minded 10-28-03 04:28 PM

walter wall vs feeble topical .
 
dont vote i hit delete thread by accident in the last one instead of delete posts..
so i lose . whatever . who cares.
i have the verses still. but only one voter (4 him) so u may have won ne way .
but i hit back & heres the verses


him:

I Eye time's face I count out the outsretched hands
Emptiness surrounds the town around my bachelor pad
They say 1 step at a time to get out, in head first I dive
36 years now running in place, I don't have the drive
I married my foolish misconceptions at an early age
abandon them in a reflection*glug*there goes the pain
back again as soon as I wake with the ache of being innate
thought bubbles long been popped, use a needle to inflate
Message in a bottle, hero's drug blind euphenism readings
Playing eenie meaning miney moe lost control found feeling
Nerves tingling, eye's blazing red like the depths of hell
Gasoline breath, flirt'n with death just for show and tell
Yawn stretch predict the addiction, no use for self respect
Streaks up and down my arms, damn should of used windex
Tears stream, downward spiral takes control just like yesterday
Bottle in front of me, frontal lobotomy: result; one and the same

me:
stumbling, riding on a twisted world & my halter falls
Its a necessity - needed no matter what, Walter Wall
i falter calls, judgement shaky, ready for days of joy
but every time my conscience seems to fade each ploy
i'm helpless yet, its lost under feelings of self respect
felt a wrecked, melted threat.. but the cards i dealt are set
helpless debts, smother me.. im turned a cold cheek
one of my molds bleak, smothered under a cold streak
im told freak, emotions contained in this crystal plan
but now i hold alms for the poor in this pistol's hand
but it goes on and on - to this day, minds still dancing
captive of itself, on a desert island.. held for ransom
won't give up - to a selfless fiend, held inside itself
like a diamond cave, soon to be lined with wealth
selflessness, a loss of hope - now supressing me
cuz self respect is brainfood - the minds necessity

so.. yea.. win = you...
nice battle. thanks for voting Born to kill, honest viotes even if for him r appreciated.


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